On 12-Apr-08, 09:01 (CDT), Juanjo Conti <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> * Package name : robotfactory
> Version : 1.0
> Upstream Author : 10 Roboticists from Santa Fe
> <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> * URL : http://code.google.com/p/pyweek6
> * License : GPL
> Description : Help Pedro to build robots in his factory (game)
Don't really need the trailing "(game)", since it will presumably be in
the "games" section of the archive.
> robotfactory is a game in which you have to use your mouse to pick up
Should be "Robotfactory is a game...". (Yes, I know that the actual
program is "robotfactory". None-the-less, in English, the first word of
a sentence is always capitalized.)
Also, the whole long description is misformated - every line should
begin with a space.
Steve
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