There's still a few minor problems.
On 23-Mar-04, 07:22 (CST), Ond?ej Sur? <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> Updated Description: program that keep passwords and other secrets
> gnome-keyring is a daemon in the session, similar to ssh-agent, and
> other applications can locate it by an environment variable.
Consider this:
Description: store passwords and other secrets securely
At a minimum, change "that keep" to "that keeps".
English sentences always begin with a capital letter; you can avoid
the annoyance of capitalizing a file name by using the project name,
e.g. "Gnome Keyring is a daemon", but there's nothing wrong with
"Gnome-keyring is a ...", either.
You might want to put the first paragraph second: it is more important
to know what it does than how it does it. And actually, I'm still not
sure whether gnome-keyring is a GUI front end or a back end that other
packages can use (which other packages?), or both.
Regards,
Steve
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