On 15-Mar-03, 11:35 (CST), Sean Harshbarger <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> * Package name : gmodconfig
> Version : x.y.z
^^^^^^
Don't forget to fix this...
> Upstream Author : Cyril Bortolato <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> * URL : http://gmodconfig.sf.net/
> * License : GPL
> Description : Gmodconfig provides a simple way for end-users to
> download, install, configure, and update Linux kernel modules through an
> easy-to-use graphic interface.
Okay, that's just completely out of control. Remember, this is the
"short" description. How about something basic like
Description: Graphical interface to manage Linux kernel modules
and putting all the details in the long description.
> gmodconfig is a Gnome application which allows (or will allow) Linux
^^^^
Cap it; Gmodconfig. If that bugs you, re-arrange the sentence -- you
don't even really need the application name again.
> users to configure kernel modules' parameters in their native language,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Technically correct, I suppose, but the possessive strikes me as
awkward; I might go with just "configure kernel modules in their native
language." Also, the antecedent for "their" is a little fuzzy, but I'm
not sure I like "in the user's native language" any better.
Steve
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Steve Greenland
The irony is that Bill Gates claims to be making a stable operating
system and Linus Torvalds claims to be trying to take over the
world. -- seen on the net
