On 5/11/05, Hamish Moffatt <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On Wed, May 11, 2005 at 08:03:34PM -0500, Adam M. wrote:
> > * Package name : dhcpv6
> > Version : 0.10
> > Upstream Author : ?? Not a single one - many...
> > * URL : http://dhcpv6.sourceforge.net/
> > * License : Mostly BSD, some LGPL and MIT/X
> > Description : a stateful address autoconfiguration protocol for IPv6
> > DHCPv6 is a stateful address autoconfiguration protocol for IPv6, a
> > counterpart to IPv6 stateless address autoconfiguration protocol. It
> > can either be used independently or it can coexist with its
> > counterpart protocol. This protocol uses client/server mode of
> > operation but can also provide support through a Relay Agent.
>
> Err. I guess you are packaging an implementation rather than a protocol
> (I'm not sure how you would package a protocol). I think you may need to
> improve your description with that in mind.
>
> s/protocol/server/ for example.
Right. Although the package will contain the server, the client and
possibly a relay. Well, probably 2 or 3 binary packages from one
source. But yes, s/protocol/{server,client,relay}/ in the one line
description. This long description should probably only be used for
the server and the client/relay have more terse long descriptions of
what they do, not a description of what DHCPv6 protocol is.
- Adam
