Andreas Barth wrote: > * Nathanael Nerode ([EMAIL PROTECTED]) [040327 23:10]: >> How about "...entirely free software. This includes programs, >> documentation, data, and any other works which are part of the Debian >> system (except possibly license texts which are distributed only for >> legal >> reasons). We provide the guidelines..." > > The idea is definitly good. However, I'm not satisfied with the > wording and the place in the text. OK, me neither, really, but it's the best I've come up with at the moment. Hopefully others will provide better, more stylish solutions. :-)
>> > 3.: keep the word "immediately" instead of "promptly" (as this is, at >> > least in my opinion, easier to understand for non-native speakers). > >> It means something different; "promptly" is as soon as is reasonable; >> "immediately" is *right this minute, before you go downstairs*. > > Well, I consider it of much more importance that the intention is > clear for as many people as possible, even if it is not 100% exact. > But perhaps there is a better way to express it both clear and > more precise. Probably. :-) > Cheers, > Andi Productive discussion is cool, isn't it? :-) -- Make sure your vote will count. http://www.verifiedvoting.org/
