ti, 2005-04-12 kello 00:20 +0200, Luk Claes kirjoitti:
> This is a proposal for Debian's consultants page. There are some 
> differences with the previous proposal: point 3 is new and the last 
> paragraph has changed.

Looks good to me, with the minor tweak in wording I suggest below.

> 2. Further contact information
>     Every consultant may list other means of contact except the mandatory
>     e-mail address.

"Except" does not sound good here, I would cut the sentence after
"contact": "Every consultant may list other means of contact.".


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