>>>>> Alexander Kuznetsov <a...@cpan.org> writes:

[…]

        (Some wording fixes and suggestions.)

 > Description     : A high speed data loading utility for PostgreSQL
 > pg_bulkload is designed to load huge amount of data to a database.
 > You can choose whether database constraints are checked and how many errors 
 > are

        If “You can…” here starts a new paragraph, there's ought to be
        an empty (“.”) line.  And if not, the linebreak here came a bit
        too early than necessary.

 > ignored during the loading. For example, you can skip integrity checks for
 > performance when you copy data from another database to PostgreSQL. On the
 > other hand, you can enable constraint checks when loading unclean data.
 > .

        Are “constraint checks” different to “integrity checks” in the
        above?  Unless they are, it should rather be, e. g.:

   … For example, you can skip integrity checks for performance when you
   copy data from another database to PostgreSQL, or have them in place
   when loading potentially unclean data.

 > The original goal of pg_bulkload was an faster alternative of COPY command in

   … was /a/ faster…

        Or, perhaps: … was to provide a faster…

 > PostgreSQL, but version 3.0 or later has some ETL features like input data
 > validation and data transformation with filter functions.
 > .

   … but as of version 3.0 some ETL features… were added.

        And what's ETL, BTW?

 > In version 3.1, pg_bulkload can convert the load data into the binary file
 > which can be used as an input file of pg_bulkload. If you check whether

        Perhaps:

   As of version 3.1, pg_bulkload can dump the preprocessed data into a
   binary file, allowing for…

        (Here, the purpose should be mentioned.  Is this for improving
        the performance of later multiple “bulkloads”, for instance?)

 > the load data is valid when converting it into the binary file, you can skip
 > the check when loading it from the binary file to a table. Which would reduce
 > the load time itself. Also in version 3.1, parallel loading works
 > more effectively than before.

        s/effectively/efficiently/.  But the whole sentence makes little
        sense, as the earlier versions weren't packaged for Debian.

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