Wolf Wiegand <[email protected]> writes: > My suggestion: > > Description: Birthday reminder for evolution's contacts
That's good, but better would be to follow the guidelines in <URL:http://www.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/ch-best-pkging-practices#s-bpp-pkg-synopsis>, which recommends the synopsis should work as a noun phrase when put into a sentence. Also, the program Evolution is normally capitalised like that within a sentence, AFAICT. Last, it seems a bit forced to use the possessive “Evolution's contacts”. Better would be to say “Evolution contacts”, specifying a type of contact (ones within Evolution). My suggestion: Description: birthday reminder for Evolution contacts -- \ “Pinky, are you pondering what I'm pondering?” “Wuh, I think | `\ so, Brain, but wouldn't anything lose its flavor on the bedpost | _o__) overnight?” —_Pinky and The Brain_ | Ben Finney -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
