Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, January 10, 2012, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for yubico-pam.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, January 10, 2012. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- yubico-pam.old/debian/libpam-yubico.templates       2012-01-06 
08:20:50.146163927 +0100
+++ yubico-pam/debian/libpam-yubico.templates   2012-01-14 08:24:25.887008629 
+0100
@@ -1,20 +1,25 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: libpam-yubico/module_args
 Type: string
 Default: mode=client try_first_pass id=N key=K
 _Description: Parameters for Yubico PAM:
- The Yubico PAM module supports two modes of operation - online
+ The Yubico PAM module supports two modes of operation: online
  validation of YubiKey OTPs or offline validation of YubiKey HMAC-SHA-1
  responses to challenges.
  .
  The default is online validation, and for that to work you need to get
- an API key (they are free) at https://upgrade.yubico.com/getapikey/ and
+ a free API key at https://upgrade.yubico.com/getapikey/ and
  enter the key id as "id=NNNN" and the base64 secret as "key=...".
  .
  All the available parameters for the Yubico PAM module are described
- in /usr/share/doc/libpam-yubico/README.gz.
-
-Template: libpam-yubico/disabled_by_default
-Type: note
-_Description: Yubico PAM module disabled by default
- To avoid locking anyone out of their system, the Yubico PAM module is
- not activated by default. Use the program `pam-auth-update' to enable it.
+ in /usr/share/doc/libpam-yubico/README.gz. To avoid accidental
+ lock-outs the module will not be active until it is enabled with the
+ "pam-auth-update" command.
--- yubico-pam.old/debian/control       2012-01-06 08:20:50.146163927 +0100
+++ yubico-pam/debian/control   2012-01-11 07:07:20.263327120 +0100
@@ -25,16 +25,14 @@
         debconf | debconf-2.0,
         ${shlibs:Depends},
         ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Yubico two-factor password+OTP (YubiKey) PAM module
- This is the Yubico PAM module. It enables you to set up your system to
- require two-factor authentication with your normal username and password
- and a YubiKey OTP that is validated against an online validation service.
+Description: two-factor password and Yubikey OTP PAM module
+ This package provides the Yubico PAM module. It enables the use of
+ two-factor authentication, with existing logins and passwords plus
+ a YubiKey One-Time Password that is validated against an online
+ validation service. The default is the free YubiCloud, but it is easy
+ to set up a custom service.
  .
- The default validation service is the free YubiCloud, but you can easily
- set up and use your own validation service.
- .
- A second mode of operation is available using the YubiKeys HMAC-SHA-1
- Challenge-Response functionality. Using this mode, you can accomplish
- offline validation using a YubiKey, for example on a laptop computer.
- This only works for local logins though, and not for logging in using
- for example SSH.
+ A second mode of operation is available using the YubiKey's HMAC-SHA-1
+ Challenge-Response functionality. This allows for offline validation
+ using a YubiKey, for example on a laptop computer. However, this only
+ works for local logins, not for instance SSH logins.
--- yubico-pam.old/debian/changelog     2012-01-06 08:20:50.146163927 +0100
+++ yubico-pam/debian/changelog 2012-02-03 05:45:14.950474197 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,21 @@
+yubico-pam (2.10-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #654848
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #656344
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #656514
+  * Dutch; (Jeroen Schot).  Closes: #657147
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #657214
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #657535
+  * Swedish (Martin Bagge / brother).  Closes: #657547
+  * Spanish; (Jardi A. Martínez Jordán).  Closes: #657946
+  * French (Julien Patriarca).  Closes: #658079
+  * Polish (Michał Kułach).  Closes: #658165
+  * Portuguese (Miguel Figueiredo).  Closes: #658420
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Fri, 06 Jan 2012 18:35:42 +0100
+
 yubico-pam (2.10-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Initial release.

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