Package: maint-guide
Version: 1.2.27
Severity: minor

The Debian New Maintainers' Guide uses some strange wording in a
sentence:

"This document was made using with these two documents as examples:"

I find it unnecessary to use both "using" and "with" in that sentence -
it could simply be re-written as

"This document was made using these two documents as examples:"

I am not a native speaker, comments from a native english speaker would
be very much welcome. The actual text is found on the first page of the
text version of the maint-guide on the debian web page:

http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/maint-guide/maint-guide.en.txt



-- System Information:
Debian Release: wheezy/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 3.2.0-1-amd64 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=sv_SE.utf8, LC_CTYPE=sv_SE.utf8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

maint-guide depends on no packages.

maint-guide recommends no packages.

Versions of packages maint-guide suggests:
ii  debian-policy         3.9.2.0
ii  developers-reference  <none>
ii  devscripts            2.11.3
ii  dh-make               <none>
ii  doc-base              <none>
ii  dput                  0.9.6.2
ii  fakeroot              1.18.2-1
ii  lintian               2.5.4
ii  pbuilder              0.206
ii  quilt                 0.51-1

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