David Prévot wrote:
> I just edited your patch in order to follow the typography used on this
> page (“e-mail”, “mailing list”). I hereby request for a review of these
> four lines on dle before including them.
[...]
> +<p>
> +Please note that most e-mail addresses below represent
> +various open mailing lists with public archives.
> +Read the <a href="$(HOME)/MailingLists/#disclaimer">\
> +disclaimer</a> before sending any messages.
> +</p>
Yes, that's good. I think I'd have phrased it as:
Please note that most of the e-mail addresses below represent
open mailing lists with public archives.
But that may just be personal taste - it's already
plausibly the kind of thing a native-speaker would write.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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