Package: dmaths
Version: 3.4+dfsg1-1.debian
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

Dear Maintainer,
translating the package description to German I found typos.
Perhaps the description would benefit from a rewrite. The
attached patch contains my suggestion.

Kind regards
      Martin

--- control.orig	2011-04-05 09:07:57.000000000 +0200
+++ control	2011-04-05 09:20:24.000000000 +0200
@@ -11,8 +11,8 @@
 Depends: libreoffice-writer, libreoffice-draw, libreoffice-common, zenity, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: dia, drgeo
 Description: Formula editor improvements for LibreOffice
- Dmaths is software that integrates with office suites LibreOffice (free)
- and NeoOffice (free) for Mac OS X and which aids scientists and those 
- who wish to edit mathematical formulas and / or scientists. It also directly 
- use your favorite drawing software and incorporate graphs functions in a 
+ Dmaths is software that integrates with the (free) office suites
+ LibreOffice and NeoOffice for Mac OS X. It aids scientists and other
+ people who wish to edit mathematical formulas, directly uses your
+ favorite drawing software and incorporates function graphs in a
  document.

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