Package: ultrapossum
Version: 1.0rc5-3
Severity: wishlist
Tags: l10n, patch
While translating the file Ultrapossum (great name! :D ), I
encountered the following errors, which I thought you might like to
eliminate in a future release.
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You've obviously tried very hard to create these strings, and I don't
mean to belittle that effort, only to help you express things
correctly. :)
1.
#. Type: note
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:3
msgid "UltraPossum may conflict original OpenLDAP configuration."
"may conflict with the original OpenLDAP configuration"
2.
#. Type: note
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:3
msgid ""
"Because UltraPossum edits the configuration file of OpenLDAP slapd by "
"itself, it may conflict with your manual editting or slapd debconf
system. "
"UltraPossum can't detect this case while the configuration time. For "
"example, if you specify the same DN value as the DN by slapd debconf
system, "
"it results in an error. So you have to check what you did other than "
"UltraPossum and try not to conflict each other."
"Because UltraPossum edits the configuration file of OpenLDAP slapd by "
"itself, it may conflict with your manual editing of slapd's debconf
options. "
"UltraPossum can't detect this situation while configuring. For "
"example, if you specify the same DN value as the DN in slapd's
debconf options, "
"it results in an error. So you have to check anything you do
differently to "
"UltraPossum and try not to conflict with each other."
3.
#. Type: string
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:14
msgid ""
"Specify the super-user name. This user can do everything for the
UltraPossum "
"directory. For example, no access control nor search limit are
performed at "
"all."
This is OK, but it's not quite the usual way of saying these things.
I would suggest:
"Specify the super-user name. The super-user has complete rights over
the UltraPossum directory. For example, neither access-control nor
search-limit routines are performed."
(The words access-control and search-limit are hyphenated in that
sentence because they are acting as adjectives.)
4.
#. Type: string
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:22
msgid "Datbase directory"
"Database"
(you need a database to hold all three a's ;) )
5.
#. Type: select
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:30
msgid ""
"In LDAP server, there are 2 types of server. One is master and
second is "
"slave server. Master server is primary LDAP server which allows to be "
"modified, while slave server doesn't. Standalone is a kind of master
server. "
"This makes configuration simple."
"There are two types of LDAP server: master and slave. The master,
primary server allows modifications, while the slave server does not.
The standalone option is a kind of master server, which simplifies
configuration."
6.
#. Type: string
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:49
msgid ""
"In slave server, you can limit who can modify the directory to keep "
"directory consistency. Only this DN can modify it."
"With the slave server, you can limit who modifies the directory, to
keep the directory consistent. ..."
7.
#. Type: password
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:55
msgid "Specify the password of the replication."
"Specify the password for replication."
It would also help to have a comment explaining what is being
replicated. ;)
8.
#. Type: boolean
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:70
msgid "All informations prepared. Are you sure to continue?"
"All information has been prepared. Are you sure you want to continue?"
"information" is plural already, a mass noun like furniture and
money. You can count bytes of information, pieces of furniture and
currency units of money, but you can't count information itself etc.
So you don't use a "s" on the end of the word. ;)
9.
#. Type: boolean
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-server.templates:70
msgid ""
"Now you specified all informations enough to configure the
UltraPossum "
"server. You can select to edit these informations again before
setting "
"UltraPossum server actually if you want."
You have now specified all the information necessary for
configuration of the UltraPossum server. (If you wish, you can choose
to edit this information again, before setting up the UltraPossum
server.)
10.
#. Type: boolean
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-failover.templates:4
msgid "Do you want to fail over the master service?"
I'm sorry, I don't understand this string at all. Could you please
explain it? Do you mean, "Do you want to backup the master service?"
11.
#. Type: select
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-failover.templates:9
msgid "Which server become the backup server?"
"Which machine will host the backup server?"
12.
#. Type: boolean
#. Description
#: ../ultrapossum-failover.templates:17
msgid "Does the backup server take over the virtual IP, too?"
"Will the backup server also use the virtual IP?"
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I hope this is useful. :)
submitted by:
Clytie Siddall (vi-VN, Vietnamese free-software translation team /
nhóm Việt hóa phần mềm tự do)
