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thanks

Hi,

Thanks for typo fix.

> Some typos and fixes for
> http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/project-history/ch-detailed.en.html
> 
> "Corel announced it's intentions" -> "Corel announced its intentions"

Fixed.
 
> "This is the first release including PowerPC and ARM ports" -> "This was
> the first release including PowerPC and ARM ports"

Fixed.

> "This was studied thoroughly by a group of interest" -> ??? I don't even
> understand what is meant here...

I guessed it and made it to "thoroughly by a group of interested people"

> "the same number of architectures as in sarge, it included" -> "the same
> number of architectures as in sarge: it included"

This is punctuation problem.  Lenny text suffers the same.  Instead of
using :" to continue long text, I used "." and started next sentense
with "This" instead of "it" following styles found in earlier releases.

> "The building has burnt to the ground. The fire department has given up
> every hope on protecting" -> "The building burnt to the ground. The fire
> department gave up hope on protecting"

Fixed.

Osamu



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