On Tue, Aug 31, 2010 at 10:34:52AM +1200, Andrew McMillan wrote: > On Mon, 2010-08-30 at 12:05 -0400, CJ Fearnley wrote: > > On Fri, Aug 27, 2010 at 10:38:14AM -0700, Russ Allbery wrote: > > > CJ Fearnley <c...@cjfearnley.com> writes: > > > > > > > 2.2.1 The main archive area > > > > > > The main archive area comprises the Debian GNU/Linux distribution; > > > only the packages in this area are considered part of the > > > distribution. None of the packages in the main archive area require > > > software outside of that area to function. > > I'd prefer even more succinct brevity, along the lines of: > > Anyone may use, share, modify and redistribute the packages in > the 'main' archive area freely<footnote>See > http://www.debian.org/intro/free for more about what we mean by > free software.</footnote>. > > main -> 'main' to make it clearer that it is a proper noun > as capitalising it would not work.
I like Andrew's version: "brevity is the soul of wit". In Policy, main, contrib, and non-free are in italics and so I presume that italics are more appropriate than quotes ('). But that's probably a technical matter for the committer. It is probably time to bring this issue to a conclusion. I can't think of anything else to add and the combination of Russ' and Andrew's text does a good job of fleshing out the nature of the three archive areas. > > > and then going on to the language already there, which already requires > > > that all the packages comply with the DFSG. > > > > > > > 2.2.2 The contrib archive area > > > > > > The contrib archive area contains supplemental packages intended to > > > work with the Debian GNU/Linux distribution, but which require > > > software outside of the distribution to either build or function. > > > Apart from this requirement, all software in the contrib archive area > > > complies with the DFSG and with the policy requirements in this > > > manual. > > > > > > > 2.2.3 The non-free archive area > > > > > > The non-free archive area contains supplemental packages intended to > > > work with the Debian GNU/Linux distribution that do not comply with > > > the DFSG or have other problems that make their distribution > > > problematic. They may not comply with all of the policy requirements > > > in this manual due to restrictions on modifications or other > > > limitations. > > > > > > I don't think any of the above changes anything normative, so once we > > > reach consensus on the wording I can go ahead and apply this. -- We are on a spaceship; a beautiful one. It took billions of years to develop. We're not going to get another. Now, how do we make this spaceship work? -- Buckminster Fuller CJ Fearnley | Explorer in Universe c...@cjfearnley.com | "Dare to be Naive" -- Bucky Fuller http://www.CJFearnley.com | http://blog.remoteresponder.net/ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org