Guillem Jover <guil...@debian.org> writes: > Here's a review from a non-native speaker.
Thank you! > On Sat, 2010-07-03 at 17:40:49 -0700, Russ Allbery wrote: >> + A <tt>.deb</tt> package contains two sets of files: a set of files >> + to installed on the system when the package is installed, and a > /files to install/, instead of /files to be installed/ given that > there's an “installed” later on? Yes, plus that's more grammatical. >> + There is an unfortunately collision of terminology here between > /There is an unfortunate collision/ or /There is unfortunately a > collision/? Good call. Both changes made in my version. -- Russ Allbery (r...@debian.org) <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/> -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
