Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, December 30, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning 
of a review
action on debconf templates for netams.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Wednesday, December 30, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- netams.old/debian/netams.templates  2009-12-30 14:09:36.967745387 +0100
+++ netams/debian/netams.templates      2010-01-13 07:21:32.712332482 +0100
@@ -1,25 +1,36 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: netams/reconfigure-webserver
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: apache2, lighttpd
 _Description: Web server to reconfigure automatically:
  Please choose the web server that should be automatically configured
- to show NeTAMS statistics.
+ for NeTAMS statistics.
 
 Template: netams/admin-password
 Type: password
 _Description: NeTAMS administrator password:
- Please enter password for "admin" user in NeTAMS database.
+ Please specify a password for the "admin" user of NeTAMS.
 
 Template: netams/admin-password-again
 Type: password
-_Description: Repeat password for NeTAMS user "admin":
+_Description: NeTAMS administrator password confirmation:
 
 Template: netams/password-mismatch
 Type: error
-_Description: Password input error!
- The two passwords you entered were not the same. Please try again.
+_Description: Password mismatch
+ The two passwords you entered were not the same. Please enter a password
+ again.
 
 Template: netams/password-empty
 Type: error
-_Description: Password input error!
- Please enter non-empty password.
+_Description: Empty password
+ You entered an empty password, which is not allowed. Please choose a non-
+ empty password.
--- netams.old/debian/netams-web.templates      2009-12-30 14:09:36.971752261 
+0100
+++ netams/debian/netams-web.templates  2010-01-13 07:21:37.828331849 +0100
@@ -1,6 +1,15 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: netams-web/reconfigure-webserver
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: apache2, lighttpd
 _Description: Web server to reconfigure automatically:
  Please choose the web server that should be automatically configured
- to show NeTAMS webinterface.
+ for NeTAMS.
--- netams.old/debian/control   2009-12-30 14:09:36.963744870 +0100
+++ netams/debian/control       2009-12-31 11:58:41.379744178 +0100
@@ -13,41 +13,52 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, dbconfig-common, lsb-base, 
dbconfig-common, lsb-base
 Recommends: netams-web, apache2|lighttpd|httpd
 Suggests: mysql-server|postgresql
-Description: Network Traffic Accounting and Monitoring Software
+Description: network traffic accounting and monitoring daemon
  NeTAMS stands for Network Traffic Accounting and Monitoring Software.
- It is built for UNIX and works for networks with Cisco routers or PC Unix
- routers (Linux/FreeBSD/Solaris). Several methods of traffic gathering are
- supported (tee/divert/ip_queue/libpcap/ulog/netflow v5 and v9/netgraph),
- database storage (BerkleyDB/MySQL/PostgresSQL/Oracle/Radius), aggregation,
- visualization, notification etc. It is possible to block traffic based on
- quotas, web authorization, account balance (billing); manage bandwidth, MAC
- assignmant violations, RADIUS services, create a flexible accounting and
- filtering policies.
+ It supports several mechanisms for traffic statistics gathering
+ (tee/divert/ip_queue/libpcap/ulog/netflow v5 and v9/netgraph), database
+ storage (Berkeley DB/MySQL/PostgresSQL/Oracle/RADIUS), aggregation,
+ visualization, notification, etcetera, and works for networks with
+ either Cisco or Unix-based routers (Linux/FreeBSD/Solaris). It can block
+ traffic based on quotas, web authorization, MAC address, or account
+ balance (billing); manage bandwidth, or RADIUS services; and create
+ flexible accounting and filtering policies.
  .
- This package contains netams daemon.
+ This package provides the main daemon for NetAMS.
 
 Package: netams-dbg
 Architecture: any
 Section: debug
 Priority: extra
 Depends: netams (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Debug symbols for the NeTAMS
- This package includes the debugging symbols for NeTAMS.
+Description: debug symbols for NeTAMS
+ NeTAMS stands for Network Traffic Accounting and Monitoring Software.
+ It supports several mechanisms for traffic statistics gathering
+ (tee/divert/ip_queue/libpcap/ulog/netflow v5 and v9/netgraph), database
+ storage (Berkeley DB/MySQL/PostgresSQL/Oracle/RADIUS), aggregation,
+ visualization, notification, etcetera, and works for networks with
+ either Cisco or Unix-based routers (Linux/FreeBSD/Solaris). It can block
+ traffic based on quotas, web authorization, MAC address, or account
+ balance (billing); manage bandwidth, or RADIUS services; and create
+ flexible accounting and filtering policies.
+ .
+ This package provides NeTAMS debugging symbols.
 
 Package: netams-web
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, apache2|httpd-cgi, 
libcrypt-generatepassword-perl, libgd-gd2-perl
 Recommends: libdbd-mysql-perl|libdbd-pg-perl
 Suggests: netams
-Description: NetAMS's web-interface
+Description: web interface for NeTAMS
  NeTAMS stands for Network Traffic Accounting and Monitoring Software.
- It is built for UNIX and works for networks with Cisco routers or PC
- Unix routers (Linux/FreeBSD/Solaris). Several methods of traffic
- gathering are supported (tee/divert/ip_queue/libpcap/ulog/netflow v5
- and v9/netgraph), database storage (BerkleyDB/MySQL/PostgresSQL/
- Oracle/Radius), aggregation, visualization, notification etc. It is
- possible to block traffic based on quotas, web authorization, account
- balance (billing); manage bandwidth, MAC assignmant violations, RADIUS
- services, create a flexible accounting and filtering policies.
+ It supports several mechanisms for traffic statistics gathering
+ (tee/divert/ip_queue/libpcap/ulog/netflow v5 and v9/netgraph), database
+ storage (Berkeley DB/MySQL/PostgresSQL/Oracle/RADIUS), aggregation,
+ visualization, notification, etcetera, and works for networks with
+ either Cisco or Unix-based routers (Linux/FreeBSD/Solaris). It can block
+ traffic based on quotas, web authorization, MAC address, or account
+ balance (billing); manage bandwidth, or RADIUS services; and create
+ flexible accounting and filtering policies.
  .
- This package contain admin and user web-interface for netams server.
+ This package provides a web interface for using and administering the
+ NetAMS server.
--- netams.old/debian/changelog 2009-12-30 14:09:36.963744870 +0100
+++ netams/debian/changelog     2010-02-02 05:16:18.694795145 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,18 @@
+netams (3.4.3+dfsg1-4) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #565127
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #563180
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #565640
+  * German (Thomas Mueller).  Closes: #563405
+  * Italian (Vincenzo Campanella).  Closes: #566156
+  * French (Julien Patriarca).  Closes: #566710
+  * Spanish (Francisco Javier Cuadrado).  Closes: #567454
+  * Portuguese (Miguel Figueiredo).  Closes: #568022
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Wed, 13 Jan 2010 19:13:14 +0100
+
 netams (3.4.3+dfsg1-3) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * debian/copyright: add more details about sources of some part of the

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