Hi! * Marco Rodrigues <[email protected]> [2009-05-11 21:32:04 CEST]: > Gerfried Fuchs wrote: > > It would be nice if the long description of your package could consist > > of full sentences[1], the last blurb in the first paragraph isn't really > > one. > > Hi Rhonda! > > I tried to improve it a bit, I hope you like it... > > --- > Description: dictionary viewer with multi-languages support > Babiloo is a dictionary viewer that supports various formats > and HTML displaying for the supported dictionaries. > Able to download more dictionaries within the application. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
This part is still the same, and it's not a sentence. That was what I was refering to. This sentence is missing its subject, what is able to download more dictionaries? > Features: > * Support for many languages / fonts rendering. > * Don't convert dictionaries, use originals. > * Phonetic sounds. > * Advanced search. > * Collaborative dictionaries. ... furthermore, I now notice you indent the list even with three spaces instead of only two - is there any special reason to do so? Thanks. :) Rhonda -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
