Dear Debian maintainer,

On Sunday, March 15, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for dictd.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Sunday, March 15, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- dictd.old/debian/dictd.templates    2009-03-11 09:14:14.179576696 +0100
+++ dictd/debian/dictd.templates        2009-04-02 08:17:39.085684300 +0200
@@ -1,9 +1,18 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dictd/run_mode
 Type: select
 __Choices: daemon, inetd, disabled
 Default: daemon
-_Description: How do you want to run dictd?
+_Description: Method for running dictd:
  The dictd server can be run either as a stand-alone daemon or from inetd. You 
can also
  disable it entirely.
  .
- Running in the daemon mode is the recommended approach.
+ It is recommended to run it as a daemon.
--- dictd.old/debian/control    2009-03-11 09:14:14.195576236 +0100
+++ dictd/debian/control        2009-03-30 07:08:18.944153152 +0200
@@ -8,23 +8,21 @@
 
 Package: dictd
 Architecture: any
-Description: Dictionary Server
- dictd is a TCP based server that allows a client to access dictionary
+Description: dictionary server
+ This package provides a TCP-based server that allows a client to access 
dictionary
  definitions from a set of natural language dictionary databases.
  .
- Many dictionary databases have been packaged for Debian.  They are
- discussed in more detail in the file
- /usr/share/doc/dictd/README.Debian.gz
+ Many dictionary databases have been packaged for use with dictd. They are
+ described in the /usr/share/doc/dictd/README.Debian.gz file.
  .
  Either dict-gcide or dict-wn is essential for a useful English
  language dictionary server.  It is strongly recommended that both be
  installed.  If you are interested in computer terminology, it is
- recommended that one or more of dict-jargon, dict-foldoc, and
- dict-vera also be installed.
+ recommended to install at least dict-jargon, dict-foldoc, or
+ dict-vera.
  .
- The client program, dict, is packaged in dict*.deb  If you are
- running a server, you will want the client for all machines in your
- network, and for testing server operations.
+ The client program, dict, is packaged separately and is needed on all
+ machines that will use the server.
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, netbase, adduser, dictzip (>= 
${source:Upstream-Version}), lsb-base (>= 3.1), ucf (>= 3), update-inetd
 Recommends: dict | dict-client
 Suggests: dict-gcide | dictd-dictionary, dict-wn, dict-jargon, dict-foldoc
@@ -33,22 +31,22 @@
 
 Package: dict
 Architecture: any
-Description: Dictionary Client
- dict is the client that queries the dictd server.  Since it is TCP
- based, it can access servers on the local host, on a local network,
- or on the Internet.
+Description: dictionary client
+ This package provides a client application to query a dictd server.
+ The client-server protocol is TCP-based; the server may then be local or
+ accessed through the network.
  .
  The DICT Development Group maintains several public servers which can
  be accessed from any machine connected to the Internet.  The default
- configuration is to query one of these servers first, but this may be
+ configuration is to query one of these servers first. This may be
  changed in the configuration file /etc/dictd/dict.conf.
  .
  Queries may be customized by numerous command line options, including
  specifying the database(s) to be queried and the search strategy to
  be used.
  .
- dict includes dictl, which simplifies using utf-8 encoded dictionaries
- with terminals that do not support utf-8.
+ This package also provides dictl, which allows using UTF-8 encoded 
dictionaries
+ with terminals that do not support UTF-8.
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, netbase, recode
 Recommends: m4, gawk
 Suggests: dictd | dict-server
@@ -56,25 +54,25 @@
 
 Package: dictzip
 Architecture: any
-Description: Compression utility for dictionary databases
- dictzip compresses files using the gzip(1) algorithm (LZ77) in a
- manner which is completely compatible with the gzip file format.  An
- extension to the gzip file format allows for random access to chunks
- of about 57kb without the overhead of decompressing the entire file.
+Description: compression utility for dictionary databases
+ This package provides a utility to compress dictionary databases with the
+ LZ77 algorithm in a manner which is completely compatible with gzip(1),
+ but using an extension that allows for random access to chunks
+ of about 57kB without the overhead of decompressing the entire file.
  .
- This package also includes dictunzip to decompress dictzipped files
- and dictzcat for viewing dictzipped files.
+ This package also includes dictunzip, to decompress dictzipped files,
+ and dictzcat, for viewing dictzipped files.
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Replaces: dictd (<< 1.7.1-1)
 
 Package: dictfmt
 Section: utils
 Architecture: any
-Description: Utility to format a file for use by the dictd server
- dictfmt converts an input file to a dictionary database that conforms
- to the DICT protocol, and creates a corresponding index file.
+Description: utility to format a file for use by a dictd server
+ This package provides dictfmt. This utility can convert an input file to a 
dictionary database that conforms
+ to the DICT protocol, and create a corresponding index file.
  . 
- This package also includes dictunformat which creates a raw database
- from  dictionary index and a dictionary database.
+ The package also provides dictunformat, which creates a raw database
+ from a dictionary index and a dictionary database.
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, gawk
 Recommends: dictzip
--- dictd.old/debian/changelog  2009-03-11 09:14:14.179576696 +0100
+++ dictd/debian/changelog      2009-04-24 07:44:46.562304227 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+dictd (1.11.1+dfsg-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #522251
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+    - Japanese. Closes: #522782
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #523189
+    - Italian. Closes: #523418
+    - Swedish. Closes: #523697
+    - Galician. Closes: #524244
+    - Spanish. Closes: #524343
+    - German. Closes: #524399
+    - French. Closes: #524867
+    - Russian. Closes: #524891
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Thu, 02 Apr 2009 08:27:21 +0200
+
 dictd (1.11.1+dfsg-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release:

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