Dear Debian maintainer,

On Thursday, January 15, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for sysstat.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Thursday, January 15, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- sysstat-8.1.7.old/debian/sysstat.templates  2009-01-14 06:14:29.000000000 
+0100
+++ sysstat-8.1.7/debian/sysstat.templates      2009-01-31 09:06:06.911174013 
+0100
@@ -1,26 +1,34 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: sysstat/remove_files
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want post-installation script to remove these data files?
- Format of daily data statistics files has changed in version ${s_version}
- of sysstat and is *not* compatible with the previous one!
+_Description: Remove old format statistics data files?
+ The format of daily data statistics files has changed in version ${s_version}
+ of sysstat and is not compatible with the previous one.
  .
- If you activate this option, any existing data files in /var/log/sysstat/
+ If you choose this option, all existing data files in the /var/log/sysstat/
  directory will be deleted.
  .
- If you don't want to remove them automatically, please remove them by hand 
later,
- in order for the sar command to work properly.
+ If you don't choose this option, the sar(1) command will not work properly
+ until you remove the files manually.
 
 Template: sysstat/enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you want to activate sysstat's cron job?
- If this option is enabled the sysstat package will collect (using the cron
- daemon and init.d script) binary data concerning system activities and store
- them in log files within /var/log/sysstat/ directory.
+_Description: Activate sysstat's cron job?
+ If this option is enabled the sysstat package will monitor system
+ activities and store the data in log files within /var/log/sysstat/.
  .
- With this data the sar(1) command will be able to display day-long system
- statistics.
+ This data allows the sar(1) command to display system statistics for the
+ whole day.
  .
- If you don't enable this option, the sar(1) command will show only the
+ If you don't enable this option, the sar(1) command will only show the
  current statistics.
--- sysstat-8.1.7.old/debian/control    2009-01-14 06:14:29.000000000 +0100
+++ sysstat-8.1.7/debian/control        2009-01-31 09:06:58.211174896 +0100
@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@
 Recommends: cron
 Suggests: isag
 Conflicts: atsar (<< 1.5-3)
-Description: sar, iostat and mpstat - system performance tools for Linux
+Description: system performance tools for Linux
  The sysstat package contains the following system performance tools:
-  * sar - collects and reports system activity information;
-  * iostat - reports CPU utilization and I/O statistics for disks;
-  * mpstat - reports global and per-processor statistics;
-  * pidstat - reports statistics for Linux tasks (processes);
-  * sadf - displays data collected by sar in various formats.
+  - sar: collects and reports system activity information;
+  - iostat: reports CPU utilization and disk I/O statistics;
+  - mpstat: reports global and per-processor statistics;
+  - pidstat: reports statistics for Linux tasks (processes);
+  - sadf: displays data collected by sar in various formats.
  .
- The statistics reported by sar concern I/O transfer rates,
+ The statistics reported by sar deal with I/O transfer rates,
  paging activity, process-related activities, interrupts,
  network activity, memory and swap space utilization, CPU
  utilization, kernel activities and TTY statistics, among
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 Depends: sysstat (>= ${source:Version}), tk8.5|wish, gnuplot-x11, 
${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: rcs
 Description: Interactive System Activity Grapher for sysstat
- This package includes the isag command, which graphically displays the 
- system activity data stored in a binary data produced by a sar command
- from a sysstat package.
+ This package provides the command isag, which graphically displays the
+ system activity data stored in the binary logs produced by sar (in the
+ package sysstat).
 Homepage: http://pagesperso-orange.fr/sebastien.godard/
--- sysstat-8.1.7.old/debian/changelog  2009-01-14 06:14:29.000000000 +0100
+++ sysstat-8.1.7/debian/changelog      2009-02-22 07:59:10.029628089 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,26 @@
+sysstat (8.1.7-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #513671
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+    - Galician. Closes: #514162
+    - Swedish. Closes: #514174
+    - Basque. Closes: #514178
+    - Vietnamese. Closes: #514308
+    - Slovak. Closes: #514383
+    - Czech. Closes: #514440
+    - Japanese. Closes: #514507
+    - Catalan. Closes: #514638
+    - Russian. Closes: #514895
+    - Italian. Closes: #515169
+    - German. Closes: #515680
+    - Spanish. Closes: #515723
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #516021
+    - French. Closes: #516077
+    - Finnish. Closes: #516334
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Sat, 31 Jan 2009 11:16:45 +0100
+
 sysstat (8.1.7-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release.

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