Package: sysstat
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Thursday, January 15, 2009, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for sysstat.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading sysstat with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Tuesday, February 03, 2009, when 
I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Tuesday, February 24, 2009. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Wednesday, February 25, 2009, I will contact you again and will send a 
final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.25-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- sysstat-8.1.7.old/debian/sysstat.templates  2009-01-14 06:14:29.000000000 
+0100
+++ sysstat-8.1.7/debian/sysstat.templates      2009-01-31 09:06:06.911174013 
+0100
@@ -1,26 +1,34 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: sysstat/remove_files
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want post-installation script to remove these data files?
- Format of daily data statistics files has changed in version ${s_version}
- of sysstat and is *not* compatible with the previous one!
+_Description: Remove old format statistics data files?
+ The format of daily data statistics files has changed in version ${s_version}
+ of sysstat and is not compatible with the previous one.
  .
- If you activate this option, any existing data files in /var/log/sysstat/
+ If you choose this option, all existing data files in the /var/log/sysstat/
  directory will be deleted.
  .
- If you don't want to remove them automatically, please remove them by hand 
later,
- in order for the sar command to work properly.
+ If you don't choose this option, the sar(1) command will not work properly
+ until you remove the files manually.
 
 Template: sysstat/enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you want to activate sysstat's cron job?
- If this option is enabled the sysstat package will collect (using the cron
- daemon and init.d script) binary data concerning system activities and store
- them in log files within /var/log/sysstat/ directory.
+_Description: Activate sysstat's cron job?
+ If this option is enabled the sysstat package will monitor system
+ activities and store the data in log files within /var/log/sysstat/.
  .
- With this data the sar(1) command will be able to display day-long system
- statistics.
+ This data allows the sar(1) command to display system statistics for the
+ whole day.
  .
- If you don't enable this option, the sar(1) command will show only the
+ If you don't enable this option, the sar(1) command will only show the
  current statistics.
--- sysstat-8.1.7.old/debian/control    2009-01-14 06:14:29.000000000 +0100
+++ sysstat-8.1.7/debian/control        2009-01-31 09:06:58.211174896 +0100
@@ -11,15 +11,15 @@
 Recommends: cron
 Suggests: isag
 Conflicts: atsar (<< 1.5-3)
-Description: sar, iostat and mpstat - system performance tools for Linux
+Description: system performance tools for Linux
  The sysstat package contains the following system performance tools:
-  * sar - collects and reports system activity information;
-  * iostat - reports CPU utilization and I/O statistics for disks;
-  * mpstat - reports global and per-processor statistics;
-  * pidstat - reports statistics for Linux tasks (processes);
-  * sadf - displays data collected by sar in various formats.
+  - sar: collects and reports system activity information;
+  - iostat: reports CPU utilization and disk I/O statistics;
+  - mpstat: reports global and per-processor statistics;
+  - pidstat: reports statistics for Linux tasks (processes);
+  - sadf: displays data collected by sar in various formats.
  .
- The statistics reported by sar concern I/O transfer rates,
+ The statistics reported by sar deal with I/O transfer rates,
  paging activity, process-related activities, interrupts,
  network activity, memory and swap space utilization, CPU
  utilization, kernel activities and TTY statistics, among
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 Depends: sysstat (>= ${source:Version}), tk8.5|wish, gnuplot-x11, 
${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: rcs
 Description: Interactive System Activity Grapher for sysstat
- This package includes the isag command, which graphically displays the 
- system activity data stored in a binary data produced by a sar command
- from a sysstat package.
+ This package provides the command isag, which graphically displays the
+ system activity data stored in the binary logs produced by sar (in the
+ package sysstat).
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