Package: openvas-server
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Sunday, January 04, 2009, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for openvas-server.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading openvas-server with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Wednesday, January 21, 2009, 
when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Wednesday, February 11, 2009. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Thursday, February 12, 2009, I will contact you again and will send a 
final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: 5.0
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.25-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- openvas-server.old/debian/openvas-server.templates  2009-01-04 
14:15:23.368345744 +0100
+++ openvas-server/debian/openvas-server.templates      2009-01-18 
09:00:44.173847696 +0100
@@ -1,48 +1,61 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: openvas-server/certificate
 Type: note
 _Description: OpenVAS daemon certificate generation
  You will need to provide the relevant information to create an SSL
  certificate for your OpenVAS daemon. Note that this information will
- *NOT* be sent to echo anybody (everything stays local), but anyone 
+ remain local to this system, but anyone 
  with the ability to connect to your OpenVAS daemon will be able to
- retrieve this information.
+ see it.
 
 
 Template: openvas-server/califetime
 Type: string
 Default: 1460
-_Description: CA certificate life time in days:
- Provide the life time of the Certificate Authority used to generate
+_Description: Certificate authority certificate lifetime (days):
+ Please choose the lifetime of the Certificate Authority certificate that
+ will be used to generate
  the OpenVAS daemon certificate.
 
 Template: openvas-server/srvlifetime
 Type: string
 Default: 365
-_Description: Server certificate life time in days:
- Provide the life time of the OpenVAS daemon certificate. Notice that the
- OpenVAS clients will not connect to servers with expired certificates
- so set this value for as long as you want this installation to last.
- You can always regenerate this certificate later by removing the certificate
- file stored in /var/lib/openvas/CA/ and running 'openvas-mkcert'
+_Description: Server certificate lifetime (days):
+ Please choose the lifetime of the OpenVAS daemon certificate.
+ .
+ OpenVAS clients will not connect to servers with expired certificates,
+ so you should choose a duration longer than the time you plan to run
+ this server.
+ .
+ This certificate can be regenerated later by removing the certificate
+ file stored in /var/lib/openvas/CA/ and running "openvas-mkcert".
 
 Template: openvas-server/country
 Type: string
-_Description: Your country (two letter code):
- Enter your country's two letter code.
+_Description: Country (two-letter code):
+ Please enter the two-letter code for the country where this server resides.
 
 Template: openvas-server/province
 Type: string
-_Description: Your state or province:
- Enter the state or provice you reside in.
+_Description: State or province:
+ Please enter the state or province where this server resides.
 
 Template: openvas-server/location
 Type: string
-_Description: Your location:
- Enter your location (e.g. town).
+_Description: Location:
+ Please enter the location (town, for example) where this server resides.
 
 Template: openvas-server/organization
 Type: string
 Default: OpenVAS
-_Description: Your organisation:
- Enter the name of your organization or company.
+_Description: Organization:
+ Please enter the name of the organization this server belongs to.
 
--- openvas-server.old/debian/control   2009-01-04 14:15:23.380495021 +0100
+++ openvas-server/debian/control       2009-01-04 16:39:58.828345764 +0100
@@ -11,30 +11,30 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, openvas-plugins
 Suggests: openvas-client
-Description: Remote network security auditor, the server
- The OpenVAS Security Scanner is a security auditing tool. It makes
- possible to test security modules in an attempt to find vulnerable
- spots that should be fixed.
+Description: remote network security auditor - server 
+ The Open Vulnerability Assessment System is a modular security auditing
+ tool, used for testing remote systems for vulnerabilities that should be
+ fixed.
  .
  It is made up of two parts: a server, and a client. The server/daemon,
  openvasd, is in charge of the attacks, whereas the client,
- OpenVAS-Client, provides the user a nice X11/GTK+ interface.
+ OpenVAS-Client, provides an X11/GTK+ user interface.
  .
- This package contains the server.
+ This package provides the server.
 
 Package: openvas-server-dev
 Section: devel
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: libopenvas1-dev, libopenvasnasl1-dev
-Description: OpenVAS server static libraries and headers
- The OpenVAS Security Scanner is a security auditing tool. It makes
- possible to test security modules in an attempt to find vulnerable
- spots that should be fixed.
+Description: remote network security auditor - static libraries and headers
+ The Open Vulnerability Assessment System is a modular security auditing
+ tool, used for testing remote systems for vulnerabilities that should be
+ fixed.
  .
  It is made up of two parts: a server, and a client. The server/daemon,
  openvasd, is in charge of the attacks, whereas the client,
- OpenVAS-Client, provides the user a nice X11/GTK+ interface.
+ OpenVAS-Client, provides an X11/GTK+ user interface.
  .
- This package contains the required static libraries, headers of the server.
-
+ This package provides the static libraries and headers required for
+ compiling the server.

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