On Fri, 2009-01-16 at 11:22 +1100, Andy Nicholson wrote:
> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> Owner: Andy Nicholson <a...@engagemedia.org>
> 
> * Package name    : Plumi

Package names need to be lowercase.

>   Version         : 0.2.3
>   Upstream Author : Andy Nicholson <a...@engagemedia.org>
> * URL             : http://plumi.org/
> * License         : GPL
>   Programming Lang: Python
>   Description     : Plumi is a Free Software video sharing Content Management 
> System based on Plone.

The short description should be lowercase, also placing "free software"
here is redundant, as the Section: header will tell you if it is free or
not (foo vs non-free/foo).

The short description should not be a complete sentence.

Something like "video sharing CMS based on Plone" would be sufficient
here.

> 
> Plumi is a Free Software video sharing Content Management System based on 
> Plone and produced by 
> the EngageMedia collective. Plumi enables you to create your own 
> sophisticated video sharing site; 
> by adding it to an existing Plone instance you can quickly have a wide array 
> of functionality to 
> facilitate video distribution and community creation.

Please make sure your description is wrapped to 80 characters.

> 
> In a net landscape where almost all video sharing sites keep their 
> distribution platform under 
> lock and key, Plumi is one contribution to creating a truly democratic media.

The second paragraph does not add anything to the package description;
you should consider removing it.

William

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