Package: po-debconf
Version: 1.0.15
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

There's a glitch in the present-tense third-person-singular
agreement in po-debconf's long description:

# Description: manage translated Debconf templates files with gettext
#  This package is an alternative to debconf-utils and provide tools
                                                              ^s
#  to manage translated Debconf templates files with common gettext
#  utilities.

While I'm at it I'd also suggest a couple of other changes:
 * That short description is technically a Verb Phrase; the DevRef
        guidelines recommend a Noun Phrase (minus articles).
 * To avoid confusion with DebConf, call the configurator "debconf".
 * In what sense is po-debconf an alternative to debconf-utils?
        Given that ucf Recommends debconf-utils, can I substitute
        po-debconf and expect unchanged functionality?  I don't
        think so; it should instead claim to be a _replacement_ for
        debconf-getlang.  Or better yet, not mention long-deprecated
        utilities at all.
 * The short description is repeated almost verbatim in the long
        description.  Phrase it slightly differently, so that
        keyword searches have two chances to find it and readers
        have two chances to understand it.

I'd suggest:

 Description: utilities for managing templates file translations with gettext
  This package provides tools for adding standard gettext-based i18n
  (internationalization) support to debconf templates files.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.25.custom
Locale: LANG=en_GB.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_GB.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

Versions of packages po-debconf depends on:
ii  gettext                0.17-4            GNU Internationalization utilities
ii  intltool-debian        0.35.0+20060710.1 Help i18n of RFC822 compliant conf
ii  perl                   5.10.0-18         Larry Wall's Practical Extraction 

Versions of packages po-debconf recommends:
ii  libcompress-zlib-perl         2.012-1    Perl module for creation and manip
ii  libmail-box-perl              2.082-2    Manage a message-folder
ii  libmail-sendmail-perl         0.79-5     Send email from a perl script

po-debconf suggests no packages.

-- no debconf information
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
--- ../po-debconf.old/debian/control	2008-06-13 00:41:23.000000000 +0100
+++ debian/control	2008-12-09 14:21:55.000000000 +0000
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: perl, gettext (>= 0.16), intltool-debian (>= 0.34.2+20060512)
 Recommends: libmail-sendmail-perl, libcompress-zlib-perl, libmail-box-perl
-Description: manage translated Debconf templates files with gettext
- This package is an alternative to debconf-utils and provide tools
- to manage translated Debconf templates files with common gettext
+Description: tool for managing templates file translations with gettext
+ This package is an alternative to debconf-utils, and provides tools
+ for managing translated debconf templates files with common gettext
  utilities.

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