Thanks.

On Sat, Apr 12, 2008 at 2:57 PM, Steve Greenland <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> On 12-Apr-08, 09:01 (CDT), Juanjo Conti <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
>  > * Package name : robotfactory
>  > Version : 1.0
>  > Upstream Author : 10 Roboticists from Santa Fe
>  > <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
>  > * URL : http://code.google.com/p/pyweek6
>  > * License : GPL
>  > Description : Help Pedro to build robots in his factory (game)
>
>  Don't really need the trailing "(game)", since it will presumably be in
>  the "games" section of the archive.
>
>
>  >  robotfactory is a game in which you have to use your mouse to pick up
>
>  Should be "Robotfactory is a game...". (Yes, I know that the actual
>  program is "robotfactory". None-the-less, in English, the first word of
>  a sentence is always capitalized.)
>
>  Also, the whole long description is misformated - every line should
>  begin with a space.
>
>  Steve
>
>  --
>  Steve Greenland
>     The irony is that Bill Gates claims to be making a stable operating
>     system and Linus Torvalds claims to be trying to take over the
>     world.       -- seen on the net
>



-- 
Juanjo Conti



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