Helge Kreutzmann wrote: > Package: dtc-xen > Version: 0.3.13-1 > Severity: normal > Tags: patch > > While updating the German translation of your Debconf template I > noticed the following typo: > -"used to automaticaly set your /etc/fstab mount points so you can do " > +"used to automatically set your /etc/fstab mount points so you can do " > > > Also I don't understand the first sentence in this question: > In order to do the setup of the VPS it's managing, dtc-xen will mount > LVM or file loopback partition on the dom0 of your Xen server. > > My main point is "LVM or file loopback partition". How is the logical > bracketing? Is it "LVM or (file loopback partition)", "(LVM or file) > loopback partition" or (LVM or file loopback) partition"? > > And what is a "file loopback partition"? > > > Next you write: > Dtc-xen will bind a SOAP Python server ... > Do you mean "bind to a SOAP Python server"? > > > Also the other new sentences sound a little awkward to me, so may you > can ask for a review on debian-l10n-english. >
Hi, I have updated the English template with the help of my co-developer Damien Mascord which is Australian and has a much better English than mine (of course...). It should be a lot better now. Would you mind to take our new templates from our Git to update your German translation? Either use: apt-get install git-core curl git clone http://git.gplhost.com/dtc-xen.git or get the files from our gitweb here (click on "tree" on the latest version): http://git.gplhost.com/gitweb/?p=dtc-xen.git;a=shortlog If you think there are still some problems in the English template, please let us know, I will correct them (with the help of Damien). Thomas -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
