Dear Debian maintainer,

On Monday, January 07, 2008, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for openvpn.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Monday, January 07, 2008. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- openvpn.old/debian/templates        2007-12-20 05:54:09.106495297 +0100
+++ openvpn/debian/templates    2008-01-22 07:34:00.648072803 +0100
@@ -1,6 +1,16 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: openvpn/change_init
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
+# NOT REVIEWED, obsolete
 _Description: Would you like to start openvpn sooner?
  Previous versions of openvpn started at the same time as most of other
  services. This means that most of these services couldn't use openvpn
@@ -15,30 +25,29 @@
 Template: openvpn/create_tun
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Would you like a TUN/TAP device to be created?
- If you accept here, the package will make a special device called
- /dev/net/tun for openvpn's use. If you refuse, the device won't be made
- now. Read README.Debian for details on how to make it. If you are using
- devfs refuse here.
+_Description: Create the TUN/TAP device?
+ If you choose this option, the /dev/net/tun device
+ needed by OpenVPN will be created.
+ .
+ You should not choose this option if you're using devfs.
 
 Template: openvpn/stop2upgrade
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Would you like to stop openvpn before it gets upgraded?
- In some cases you may be upgrading openvpn in a remote server using
- a VPN to do so. The upgrade process stops the running daemon before 
- installing the new version, in that case you may lose your connection,
- the upgrade may be interrupted, and you may not be able to reconnect to
- the remote host.
- .
- Unless you do your upgrades locally, it is advised NOT to stop openvpn
- before it gets upgraded. The installation process will restart it once
- it's done.
+_Description: Stop OpenVPN when upgraded?
+ The upgrade process stops the running daemon before 
+ installing the new version. If you are installing or upgrading the
+ system remotely, that could break the upgrade process.
+ .
+ Unless upgrades are performed locally, you should choose to not stop
+ OpenVPN before it is upgraded. The installation process will restart it once
+ the upgrade is completed.
  .
- This option will take effect in your next upgrade.
+ This option will take effect for the next upgrade.
 
 Template: openvpn/default_port
 Type: note
+# NOT REVIEWED, obsolete
 _Description: Default port has changed
  OpenVPN's default port has changed from 5000 to 1194 (IANA assigned).
  If you don't specify the port to be used on your VPNs, this upgrade
@@ -51,6 +60,7 @@
 Template: openvpn/change_init2
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
+# NOT REVIEWED, obsolete
 _Description: Would you like to stop openvpn later?
  Previous versions of openvpn stopped at the same time as most of other
  services. This meant that some of services stopping later couldn't use 
--- openvpn.old/debian/control  2007-12-20 05:54:09.106495297 +0100
+++ openvpn/debian/control      2008-01-19 08:09:52.212418349 +0100
@@ -9,15 +9,16 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: debconf | debconf-2.0, ${shlibs:Depends}
 Suggests: openssl, resolvconf
-Description: Virtual Private Network daemon
- An application to securely tunnel IP networks over a single UDP or TCP port.
- It can be used to access remote sites, make secure point to point connections,
- enhance WiFi security, etc.
+Description: virtual private network daemon
+ OpenVPN is an application to securely tunnel IP networks over a
+ single UDP or TCP port. It can be used to access remote sites, make
+ secure point-to-point connections, enhance wireless security, etc.
  .
- OpenVPN uses all of the encryption, authentication, and certification features
- of the OpenSSL library (any cipher, key size, or HMAC digest).
+ OpenVPN uses all of the encryption, authentication, and certification
+ features provided by the OpenSSL library (any cipher, key size, or
+ HMAC digest).
  .
- OpenVPN may use static, pre-shared keys or TLS-based dynamic key exchange.  It
+ OpenVPN may use static, pre-shared keys or TLS-based dynamic key exchange. It
  also supports VPNs with dynamic endpoints (DHCP or dial-up clients), tunnels
- over NAT or connection-oriented stateful firewalls (like Linux's iptables).
+ over NAT or connection-oriented stateful firewalls (such as Linux's iptables).
 
--- openvpn.old/debian/changelog        2007-12-20 05:54:09.106495297 +0100
+++ openvpn/debian/changelog    2008-02-13 07:02:58.767583699 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,25 @@
+openvpn (2.1~rc4-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #462048
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Japanese. Closes: #462736
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #462795
+  * Norwegian Bokmål. Closes: #462811
+  * Swedish. Closes: #462979
+  * Galician. Closes: #462990
+  * Spanish. Closes: #463047
+  * French. Closes: #463636
+  * Italian. Closes: #463703
+  * Finnish. Closes: #463952
+  * Czech. Closes: #464221
+  * Russian. Closes: #464666
+  * German. Closes: #465317
+  * Brazilian Portuguese. Closes: #465440
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #465535
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Wed, 13 Feb 2008 07:02:58 +0100
+
 openvpn (2.1~rc4-2) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Upload to unstable. New upstream fixes:

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