Package: egroupware
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, January 16, 2008, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for egroupware.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading egroupware with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Friday, February 08, 2008, when 
I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Friday, February 29, 2008. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or 
changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Saturday, March 01, 2008, I will contact you again and will send a final 
patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.23-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- egroupware.old/debian/egroupware-core.templates     2008-01-14 
08:36:03.457925740 +0100
+++ egroupware/debian/egroupware-core.templates 2008-02-05 07:43:05.229699095 
+0100
@@ -1,23 +1,32 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: egroupware/configuration/note
 Type: note
-_Description: eGroupWare core package configuration note
- The eGroupWare core package configuration will only prompt you for the
- administrator name and password.  To complete the initialization, point
- your browser to the eGroupWare setup, normally at
- .
- http(s)://${site}/egroupware/setup/
+_Description: eGroupWare core package configuration
+ The eGroupWare core package configuration process will only help setting up
+ the administrator name and password.  To complete the initialization, point
+ a web browser at the eGroupWare setup page at
+ http(s)://${site}/egroupware/setup/.
  .
- There you can continue the configuration, initialize the database, and
- register installed eGroupWare applications.
+ This page allows further configuration steps, initialization of the
+ database, and registering of installed eGroupWare applications.
 
 Template: egroupware/webserver
 Type: multiselect
+# Not reviewed, obsolete
 _Choices: Apache 2, Apache, Apache SSL, Apache Perl
 Default: Apache 2
 _Description: Web server for eGroupWare:
  Choose here which web server you want to configure eGroupWare for.
  eGroupWare supports any web server that supports PHP, but this
- configuration process only supports some Apache variants.  Feel free to
+ configuration process only supports some Apache variants.   Feel free to
  submit any hint or patch that would help in the setup of other web
  servers.
 
@@ -26,22 +35,20 @@
 Default: admin
 _Description: Header admin user name:
  The header admin user can change various global configuration settings
- and add eGroupWare domains via a provided web interface.  You must
- choose a name for that user.
+ and add eGroupWare domains via a provided web interface.
 
 Template: egroupware/header/password
 Type: password
 _Description: Header admin password:
- You must choose a password for the header admin user.
+ Please choose a password for the header admin user.
 
 Template: egroupware/header/password/confirm
 Type: password
-_Description: Confirm the header admin password:
- Please enter the header admin password again.  If the password you enter
- here does not match the previously entered one, you will be asked to
- enter it again.
+_Description: Header admin password confirmation:
+ Please confirm the header admin password.
 
 Template: egroupware/header/password/mismatch
-Type: text
-_Description: Passwords did not match.
- The header admin passwords you entered did not match.  Please try again.
+Type: error
+_Description: Password mismatch
+ The two passwords you entered were not the same.  Please enter a
+ password again.
--- egroupware.old/debian/control       2008-01-14 08:36:03.457925740 +0100
+++ egroupware/debian/control   2008-02-02 18:20:49.783967396 +0100
@@ -5,17 +5,18 @@
 Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 5), dpatch, po-debconf
 Build-Depends-Indep: gawk
 Standards-Version: 3.7.2
+Homepage: http://www.egroupware.org/
 
 Package: egroupware
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core, ${egw:Modules}
 Suggests: egroupware-ldap
-Description: web-based groupware suite
+Description: web-based groupware suite - meta-package
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This package is a metapackage containing dependencies on all the
- eGroupWare applications.  If you want to conveniently install
- eGroupWare with all available applications, install this package.
+ eGroupWare applications.  It should be used to conveniently install
+ eGroupWare with all available applications.
 
 Package: egroupware-core
 Architecture: all
@@ -33,7 +34,7 @@
  php5-mhash | php4-mhash,
  php5-imap | php4-imap,
  php5-auth-pam | php4-auth-pam
-Description: eGroupWare core modules
+Description: web-based groupware suite - core modules
  ${commondesc}
  .
  The core package provides the modules for initial setup, global
@@ -50,14 +51,14 @@
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This package contains files to support storing eGroupWare user and
- addressbook data in an LDAP server.  It should be installed on the
+ address book data in an LDAP server.  It should be installed on the
  machine that hosts the LDAP server, which is not necessarily the
  machine that hosts eGroupWare.
 
 Package: egroupware-addressbook
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare addressbook management application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - address book management application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a contact manager with vCard
@@ -67,7 +68,7 @@
 Package: egroupware-bookmarks
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare bookmark management application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - bookmark management application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a bookmark management facility.
@@ -76,42 +77,42 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version}), egroupware-infolog (= ${Source-Version})
 Recommends: php4-mcal
-Description: eGroupWare calendar management application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - calendar management application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a powerful calendar with a meeting
- request system, alarms, iCal and E-Mail support, and ACL security.
+ request system, alarms, iCal and e-mail support, and ACL security.
 
 Package: egroupware-developer-tools
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare developer tools
+Description: web-based groupware suite - developer tools
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application contains tools for eGroupWare developers
- and translators.  The translation tools allow you to create and extend
+ and translators.  The translation tools allow creating and extending
  translation files for eGroupWare.  They can search the sources for new
- or added phrases and show you the ones missing in your language.
+ or added phrases and show the ones missing in a given language.
 
 Package: egroupware-emailadmin
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare E-mail user administration application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - e-mail user administration application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This eGroupWare application allows the administration of E-mail user
+ This eGroupWare application allows administering e-mail user
  accounts.  It is intended to be used with the package
  egroupware-felamimail.
 
 Package: egroupware-etemplate
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: widget-based template system for eGroupWare
+Description: web-based groupware suite - widget-based template system
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application contains a widget-based template system for
  eGroupWare with an interactive editor and a database-table editor
- (creates tables_current.inc.php and updates automatically
+ (creates tables_current.inc.php and automatically updates
  tables_update.inc.php).
 
 Package: egroupware-felamimail
@@ -119,27 +120,27 @@
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-emailadmin (= 
${Source-Version}),
  php5-imap | php4-imap
 Provides: mail-reader, imap-client
-Description: eGroupWare FeLaMiMail application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - FeLaMiMail application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- FeLaMiMail is an E-mail application for eGroupWare.
+ FeLaMiMail is an e-mail application for eGroupWare.
 
 Package: egroupware-filemanager
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare file manager application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - file manager application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a web-based file manager.
- Abilities include all common file actions (upload, mkdir, rename,
+ Features include all common file actions (upload, mkdir, rename,
  delete, copy, move), creating, and editing text files, and syncing with
  the file system.  Per file/directory comments are stored, and version
- history is tracked.  Group sharing and ACL are fully supported.
+ history is tracked.  Group sharing and ACLs are fully supported.
 
 Package: egroupware-infolog
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare infolog application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - infolog application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application allows tracking on-going and previous support
@@ -148,16 +149,16 @@
 Package: egroupware-manual
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-wiki (= 
${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare manual
+Description: web-based groupware suite - manual
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This package contains the eGroupWare manual, provided an
+ This package contains the eGroupWare manual, provided as an
  eGroupWare application.
 
 Package: egroupware-mydms
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare document management system
+Description: web-based groupware suite - document management system
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This package contains a document management system for eGroupWare.
@@ -165,16 +166,16 @@
 Package: egroupware-news-admin
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare news administration interface
+Description: web-based groupware suite - news administration interface
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This eGroupWare application provides an interface to handle a simple web
- based news system.
+ This eGroupWare application provides an interface to handle a simple
+ web-based news system.
 
 Package: egroupware-phpbrain
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare phpbrain application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - phpbrain application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a knowledge base system.
@@ -183,18 +184,18 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}),
  php5-gd | php4-gd
-Description: eGroupWare phpSysInfo application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - phpSysInfo application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- phpSysInfo is a PHP script that displays information about the
- host being accessed.  It will displays things like uptime,
- lm-sensors readings, CPU, memory, SCSI, IDE, PCI, ethernet, floppy,
+ This PHP script displays information about the
+ host being accessed.  It displays uptime,
+ lm-sensors readings, CPU, memory, SCSI, IDE, PCI, Ethernet, floppy,
  and video information.
 
 Package: egroupware-polls
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare polling application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - polling application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a simple polling system.
@@ -204,15 +205,15 @@
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version}),
  php5-gd | php4-gd,
  ttf-bitstream-vera
-Description: eGroupWare projects management application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - projects management application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This eGroupWare application provides a project work-flow tracker.
+ This eGroupWare application provides a project workflow tracker.
 
 Package: egroupware-registration
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare registration application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - registration application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application allows users to create eGroupWare accounts
@@ -223,7 +224,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version}), egroupware-filemanager (= ${Source-Version})
 Suggests: egroupware-calendar
-Description: eGroupWare resource manager application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - resource manager application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a resource management and booking
@@ -233,16 +234,16 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}),
  php5-ldap | php4-ldap
-Description: eGroupWare Samba administration application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - Samba administration application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This eGroupWare application is for managing LDAP-based Samba servers.
+ This eGroupWare application allows managing LDAP-based Samba servers.
 
 Package: egroupware-sitemgr
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version})
 Recommends: php4-xslt
-Description: eGroupWare site manager application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - site manager application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This is a content management system application for eGroupWare.
@@ -251,16 +252,16 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version})
 Suggests: egroupware-projectmanager
-Description: eGroupWare timesheet application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - timesheet application
  ${commondesc}
  .
- This eGroupWare application is for tracking times and other activities
- for the project manager.
+ This eGroupWare application allows tracking times and other activities
+ for a project manager.
 
 Package: egroupware-wiki
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version}), egroupware-etemplate (= 
${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare wiki application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - wiki application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a wiki.
@@ -268,7 +269,7 @@
 Package: egroupware-workflow
 Architecture: all
 Depends: egroupware-core (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: eGroupWare workflow application
+Description: web-based groupware suite - workflow application
  ${commondesc}
  .
  This eGroupWare application provides a workflow management engine.

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