Dear Debian maintainer,

On Friday, November 30, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for shorewall-common.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Friday, November 30, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- shorewall-common.old/debian/shorewall-common.templates      2007-11-24 
09:13:27.265477173 +0100
+++ shorewall-common/debian/shorewall-common.templates  2007-12-19 
07:31:02.844129486 +0100
@@ -1,21 +1,29 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: shorewall-common/dont_restart
 Type: note
-_Description: Shorewall won't be restarted automatically
- This will prevent network blackout due to changes in configuration files.
- .
- Check your configuration and then restart Shorewall issuing:
- .
-         invoke-rc.d shorewall restart
- .
- or
+_Description: No automatic restart for Shorewall
+ Shorewall will not be restarted automatically after being upgraded,
+ to prevent changes in configuration files causing network outages.
  .
-         /etc/init.d/shorewall restart
+ You should check Shorewall's configuration files and restart it with
+ 'invoke-rc.d shorewall restart'.
 
 Template: shorewall-common/major_release
 Type: boolean
-_Description: Do you want to restart Shorewall right now? 
- This is a major release of Shorewall that introduces some changes in the
- configuration files. You have to check carefully your configuration before
- restarting your firewall to avoid failures and network blackout. The changes
- are listed in /usr/share/doc/shorewall/releasenotes.txt.gz.
-
+_Description: Restart Shorewall?
+ This release of Shorewall introduces some changes in the
+ configuration files - see
+ /usr/share/doc/shorewall-common/releasenotes.txt.gz.
+ .
+ To avoid the risk of failures and network outages these files should
+ be checked carefully before the firewall is restarted.
+ .
+ Please choose whether you want to restart Shorewall immediately.
--- shorewall-common.old/debian/control 2007-11-24 09:13:27.265477173 +0100
+++ shorewall-common/debian/control     2007-12-16 19:53:49.836108432 +0100
@@ -14,22 +14,22 @@
 Suggests: shorewall-doc, linux-image, make
 Conflicts: ipmasq, knetfilter, firewall-easy, filtergen, uif, webmin-firewall, 
ipmenu, gnome-lokkit, guarddog, guidedog, ferm
 Replaces: shorewall
-Description: Shoreline Firewall, netfilter configurator (common files)
- Shorewall allows you to describe your firewall/gateway requirements
- using entries in a set of configuration files. It reads those
- configuration files and, with the help of the iptables utility,
- configures Netfilter to match your requirements.
+Description: Shoreline Firewall, netfilter configurator - common files
+ Shorewall allows firewall/gateway requirements to be described using
+ entries in a set of configuration files. It reads those configuration
+ files and, with the help of the iptables utility, configures
+ netfilter to match these requirements.
  .
  Shorewall supports a wide range of router/firewall/gateway applications,
  traffic shaping and almost every type of VPN.
  .
- This package contains files needed by both the perl-based and
+ This package contains files needed by both the Perl-based and
  shell-based compilers.
 
 Package: shorewall
 Architecture: all
 Depends: shorewall-shell
-Description: Shoreline Firewall (transitional package)
- This package is simply to facilitate the transition to shorewall-shell.
- You may remove it at your convenience.
+Description: Shoreline Firewall, netfilter configurator - transitional package
+ This package is a transition package to shorewall-shell. It can be safely
+ removed.
 
--- shorewall-common.old/debian/changelog       2007-11-24 09:13:27.265477173 
+0100
+++ shorewall-common/debian/changelog   2008-01-07 18:15:37.207892196 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,22 @@
+shorewall-common (4.0.6-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #457024
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Spanish; Castilian. Closes: #457693
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #458222
+  * Finnish. Closes: #458256
+  * Galician. Closes: #458530
+  * French. Closes: #458570
+  * Korean. Closes: #458588
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #459001
+  * Russian. Closes: #459310
+  * Czech. Closes: #459329
+  * German. Closes: #459375
+  * Dutch. Closes: #459540
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 07 Jan 2008 18:15:37 +0100
+
 shorewall-common (4.0.6-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release

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