I generally agree with Ian that several of the changes proposed here don't
seem clearly better to me. A few others have already been made, namely:
> Michael Tautschnig writes ("Bug#422552: Minor typos and wording suggestions"):
>> - Page 8, 2.5 Priorities, Paragraph on "required": s/Removing an
>> required/Removing a required/
>> - Page 39, 6.1, second paragraph: ... and must not be not
>> world-writable; either this is a major error as it means that the
>> files _must be_ world-writable, or it should be reworded to must
>> be world-writable. Then it would deserve some explanation because
>> usually one would never want world-writable scripts.
The remaining one that was uncontroversial is:
>> - Page 40, 6.2, heading: Maintainer scripts Idempotency -
>> idempotency should be lowercase here.
I'm making this change in my arch repository. Thank you very much for the
proofreading!
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