Package: gamine
Severity: minor

Hi,

The current description reads: 'The child uses his mouse to draw colored dot 
and line on the screen.'.
Please don't assume the user to be a male. Instead use a gender-agnostic 
pronoun or article. I suggest 'The child uses the mouse to [...]'.

By the way, shouldn't the sentence continue as '[...] colored dots and
lines [...]'? I didn't try the program, though, so I don't know what is 
supposed to be drawn. :)

Regards.
-- 
David Ammouial
http://da.weeno.net/

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