Package: gnokii Version: 0.6.22.dfsg-2 Severity: minor gnokii, and the other packages built from the same source, need some copyediting on their descriptions. In particular:
* The descriptions misuse the definite article "the". "Datasuite for the mobile phones" should simply say "Datasuite for mobile phones". "communication with the phones" should say "communication with mobile phones". "supports the most mobile phones", while grammatically correct, should possibly read "supports most mobile phones", which has a different meaning. * The last sentence of the common description, " It currently supports the most mobile phones, all AT capable mobiles as well as Symbian phones.", seems like a run-on. The portion after the comma either needs a connecting word such as "including", or it needs to become a separate sentence; I suggest the former. * "This package installs the whole suit of programs." - s/suit/suite/. - Josh Triplett -- System Information: Debian Release: lenny/sid APT prefers unstable APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental') Architecture: i386 (i686) Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-rc1 (PREEMPT) Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
