Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, September 04, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning 
of a review
action on debconf templates for hobbit.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch-nopo file contains a patch for the templates and control file(s).

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, September 04, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- hobbit.old/debian/hobbit-client.templates   2007-09-08 10:01:50.000000000 
+0200
+++ hobbit/debian/hobbit-client.templates       2007-09-18 07:45:05.413054151 
+0200
@@ -1,18 +1,29 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: hobbit-client/HOBBITSERVERS
 Type: string
 Default: 127.0.0.1
 _Description: Hobbit server:
- The network address used to access your Hobbit server(s). If you have multiple
- servers, list all of them separated by spaces.
- Consider using the IP-adresses instead of hostnames, in case of a problem DNS
- might not work.
+ Please enter the network address used to access the Hobbit
+ server(s). If you use multiple servers, use a space-separated list of
+ addresses.
+ .
+ Using host names instead of IP addresses is discouraged in case the
+ network experiences DNS failures.
 
 Template: hobbit-client/CLIENTHOSTNAME
 Type: string
 Default:
 _Description: Client hostname:
- The hostname used by the Hobbit client when sending
+ Please enter the host name used by the Hobbit client when sending
  reports to the Hobbit server. This name must match
- the named used in the bb-hosts file on the Hobbit
+ the name used in the bb-hosts file on the Hobbit
  server.
 
--- hobbit.old/debian/control   2007-09-08 10:01:50.000000000 +0200
+++ hobbit/debian/control       2007-09-15 11:39:02.962495432 +0200
@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@
 Package: hobbit
 Architecture: any
 Depends: hobbit-client, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: monitoring system for systems, networks and applications
+Description: monitoring system for systems, networks and applications - server
  Hobbit is a network- and applications-monitoring system designed for use in
- large-scale networks. But it will also work just fine on a small network with
+ large-scale networks. It will also work just fine on a small network with
  just a few nodes. It is low-overhead and high-performance, with an easy to use
  web front-end. It handles monitoring of network services, and through client
  packages it can also be used to monitor server-specific items. Alerts can
--- hobbit.old/debian/changelog 2007-09-08 10:01:50.000000000 +0200
+++ hobbit/debian/changelog     2007-10-05 16:35:18.703688264 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,22 @@
+hobbit (4.2.0.dfsg-4) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #442953
+  [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Basque. Closes: #443155
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #443161
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #443214
+  * Finnish. Closes: #443617
+  * Czech. Closes: #443667
+  * Russian. Closes: #443861
+  * Tamil. Closes: #444281
+  * Italian. Closes: #444610
+  * French. Closes: #444659
+  * Galician. Closes: #444751
+  * Brazilian Portuguese. Closes: #445339
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Fri, 05 Oct 2007 16:34:54 +0200
+
 hobbit (4.2.0.dfsg-3) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Debconf translations:

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