Package: manpages
Version: 2.64-1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Found some typos in '/usr/share/man/man7/ip.7.gz', see attached '.diff'.

Note: grammar typos, I usually avoid these as too "expensive".  If
any seem questionable, skip 'em.  (Please try to keep the 's/me/be/' fix.)

Hope this helps...

-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-k7 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968) (ignored: LC_ALL set to C)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

-- no debconf information


--- ip.7        2007-09-30 15:27:18.000000000 -0400
+++ /tmp/ip.7   2007-10-02 02:30:48.000000000 -0400
@@ -713,10 +713,10 @@
 .\"
 .TP
 .BR ip_always_defrag " (Boolean)"
-[New with kernel 2.2.13; in earlier kernel version the feature
+[New with kernel 2.2.13; in earlier kernel versions this feature
 was controlled at compile time by the
 .B CONFIG_IP_ALWAYS_DEFRAG
-option; this file is not present in 2.4.x and later]
+option; this option is not present in 2.4.x and later]
 
 When this boolean frag is enabled (not equal 0) incoming fragments
 (parts of IP packets
@@ -726,11 +726,11 @@
 about to be forwarded.
 
 Only enable if running either a firewall that is the sole link
-to your network or a transparent proxy; never ever turn on here for a
+to your network or a transparent proxy; never ever use it for a
 normal router or host.
-Otherwise fragmented communication may me disturbed
-when the fragments would travel over different links.
-Defragmentation
+Otherwise fragmented communication can be disturbed
+when the fragments travel over different links.
+Defragmenting
 also has a large memory and CPU time cost.
 
 This is automagically turned on when masquerading or transparent


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