Package: openslp
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, September 05, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for openslp.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading openslp with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Wednesday, September 26, 2007, 
when I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Wednesday, October 17, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around <DAY25>, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- openslp.old/debian/libslp1.templates        2007-09-05 06:08:43.868097797 
+0200
+++ openslp/debian/libslp1.templates    2007-09-23 08:42:51.547495461 +0200
@@ -1,21 +1,29 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: libslp1/multicast
 Type: error
-_Description: To reduce network traffic use a IP multicast enabled kernel
- The kernel version that you are currently running does not appear to
- support IP multicast. OpenSLP will continue to work even without multicast
- support in the kernel by using broadcasts. However, broadcasts are less
- efficient on the network, so please consider upgrading to a multicast
- enabled kernel.
+_Description: IP multicast-enabled kernel needed to reduce traffic
+ The current kernel does not support IP multicast. OpenSLP will
+ continue to work even without multicast support in the kernel, by
+ using broadcasts. However, broadcasts are less efficient on the
+ network, so please consider upgrading to a multicast-enabled kernel.
 
 Template: libslp1/multicast-route
 Type: error
-_Description: Please configure a multicast route in /etc/network/interfaces
- You don't seem to have a multicast route configured. OpenSLP can take
- advantage of multicast packets and reduce traffic on your network. You can
- setup a multicast route automatically on system startup by adding the
- following commands to the "interface" line(s) in your
+#flag:translate!:3
+_Description: Multicast route needed in /etc/network/interfaces
+ There seem to be no multicast route configured. OpenSLP can take
+ advantage of multicast packets and reduce traffic on the network. You can
+ set up a multicast route automatically on system startup by adding the
+ following commands to the "interface" line(s) in the
  /etc/network/interfaces file.
  .
- "    up route add -net 224.0.0.0 netmask 240.0.0.0 dev eth0"
- .
- "    down route del -net 224.0.0.0 netmask 240.0.0.0 dev eth0"
+  up route add -net 224.0.0.0 netmask 240.0.0.0 dev eth0
+  down route del -net 224.0.0.0 netmask 240.0.0.0 dev eth0
--- openslp.old/debian/control  2007-09-05 06:08:43.868097797 +0200
+++ openslp/debian/control      2007-09-23 08:43:47.050658406 +0200
@@ -12,26 +12,28 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
 Suggests: openslp-doc (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: OpenSLP Server (slpd)
- Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used to
- discover/advertise services on the network. You can use SLP for anything
- from locating a suitable printer on your floor to discovering what LDAP
- directories are available in your organization. This package provides slpd,
- the OpenSLP daemon, which provides an SLPv2 (RFC 2608) compliant Service
- Agent and Directory Agent. 
+Description: OpenSLP (Service Location Protocol) - server
+ Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used
+ to discover/advertise services on the network. It can be used for
+ anything from locating a suitable printer in the neighborhood to
+ discovering what LDAP directories are available in the organization.
+ .
+ This package provides slpd, the OpenSLP daemon, which provides an
+ SLPv2 (RFC 2608) compliant Service Agent and Directory Agent.
 
 Package: openslp-doc
 Section: doc
 Priority: extra
 Architecture: all
-Description: OpenSLP documentation
- Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used to
- discover/advertise services on the network. You can use SLP for anything 
- from locating a suitable printer on your floor to discovering what LDAP
- directories are available in your organization. This package provides
- comprehensive documentation on SLP and the OpenSLP implementation; it
- contains an Introduction to SLP, a User's Guide, a Programmer's Guide and
- related RFCs. 
+Description: OpenSLP (Service Location Protocol) - documentation
+ Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used
+ to discover/advertise services on the network. It can be used for
+ anything from locating a suitable printer in the neighborhood to
+ discovering what LDAP directories are available in the organization.
+ .
+ This package provides comprehensive documentation on SLP and the
+ OpenSLP implementation; it contains an Introduction to SLP, a User's
+ Guide, a Programmer's Guide and related RFCs.
 
 Package: libslp1
 Section: libs
@@ -39,15 +41,17 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf | debconf-2.0, net-tools
 Suggests: slpd (= ${Source-Version}), openslp-doc (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: OpenSLP libraries
- Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used to
- discover/advertise services on the network. You can use SLP for anything
- from locating a suitable printer on your floor to discovering what LDAP
- directories are available in your organization.  This package provides 
- the OpenSLP run-time library package that is linked to SLP aware
- applications. This library implements RFC 2614 - An API for Service
- Location. Unless there is a SLP DA in the network, you must install the
- slpd package to be able to advertise the services.
+Description: OpenSLP (Service Location Protocol) - libraries
+ Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used
+ to discover/advertise services on the network. It can be used for
+ anything from locating a suitable printer in the neighborhood to
+ discovering what LDAP directories are available in the organization.
+ .
+ This package provides the OpenSLP run-time library package that is
+ linked to SLP aware applications. This library implements RFC 2614 -
+ An API for Service Location. Unless there is an SLP DA on the network,
+ you must install the slpd package to be able to advertise the
+ services.
 
 Package: slptool
 Section: utils
@@ -55,12 +59,13 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: libslp1 (= ${Source-Version})
 Suggests: openslp-doc (= ${Source-Version})
-Description: SLP command line tool
- Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used to
- discover/advertise services on the network. You can use SLP for anything
- from locating a suitable printer on your floor to discovering what LDAP
- directories are available in your organization. This package contains
- the a utility which you can use to exercise/test SLP.
+Description: OpenSLP (Service Location Protocol) - command line tool
+ Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used
+ to discover/advertise services on the network. It can be used for
+ anything from locating a suitable printer in the neighborhood to
+ discovering what LDAP directories are available in the organization.
+ .
+ This package provides a utility which can be used to practice with SLP.
 
 Package: libslp-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -69,12 +74,15 @@
 Depends: libslp1 (= ${Source-Version}), libc6-dev
 Suggests: openslp-doc (= ${Source-Version})
 Conflicts: libxdelta3-dev
-Description: OpenSLP development libraries
- Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used to
- discover/advertise services on the network. You can use SLP for anything
- from locating a suitable printer on your floor to discovering what LDAP
- directories are available in your organization. This package allows
- development of SLP applications using the OpenSLP libraries. It includes
- headers, libraries and links to allow static and dynamic linking. It also
- includes slptool, a utility to test service advertisement/lookup. The
- library implements RFC 2614 - An API for Service Location. 
+Description: OpenSLP (Service Location Protocol) - development libraries
+ Service Location Protocol is an IETF standard protocol that is used
+ to discover/advertise services on the network. It can be used for
+ anything from locating a suitable printer in the neighborhood to
+ discovering what LDAP directories are available in the organization.
+ .
+ This package allows the development of SLP applications using the
+ OpenSLP libraries. It includes headers, libraries and links to allow
+ static and dynamic linking. It also includes slptool, a utility to
+ test service advertisement/lookup. The library implements RFC 2614 -
+ An API for Service Location.
+

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