(sending this even if you uploaded a new version including some of
these fixes in the meantime)

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for ion3.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch-nopo file contains a patch for the templates and control file(s).

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Wednesday, May 30, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- ion3.old/debian/ion3.templates      2007-05-25 08:09:25.764023301 +0200
+++ ion3/debian/ion3.templates  2007-06-27 10:07:19.625976365 +0200
@@ -1,21 +1,31 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-outdated
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you understand this version is not supported by the author?
+_Description: Do you understand that this version is not supported by the 
author?
  The version of Ion3 you are installing (version ${version}) is not
  the latest version released by the author.
  .
  DO NOT send bug reports or questions to the author unless they apply
- to the latest version, available from:
+ to the latest version, available at:
   http://modeemi.fi/~tuomov/ion/download.html
  .
- You should send any bug reports about this package to the Debian bug
- tracking system and any other questions to the Debian maintainer.
+ Otherwise, you should send any bug reports about this package to the
+ Debian bug tracking system and any other questions to the Debian
+ maintainer.
 
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-maybe-outdated
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you understand this version may not be supported by the 
author?
+_Description: Do you understand that this version may not be supported by the 
author?
  The version of Ion3 you are installing (version ${version}) may not
  be the latest version released by the author.
  .
@@ -29,6 +39,6 @@
 
 Template: ion3/did-not-acknowledge-outdated
 Type: error
-Description: You did not acknowledge installation of an old version.
- You must acknowledge that the author does not support old versions
+Description: Non-acknowledged installation of an old version
+ Please acknowledge that the author does not support old versions
  and should not be contacted about them.
--- ion3.old/debian/control     2007-05-25 08:09:25.764023301 +0200
+++ ion3/debian/control 2007-06-03 10:03:09.654315115 +0200
@@ -20,16 +20,14 @@
  easier. Flexible configuration is possible thanks to Lua, which is
  used as the configuration language.
  .
- There is also support for so-called "floating workspaces" where
+ There is also support for so-called 'floating workspaces' where
  windows are managed the conventional way, so that you can still run
  applications which do not fit very well into Ion's window management
  approach. A pwm3 binary is included which starts Ion with floating
  workspaces as the default, thus replacing the now obsolete PWM window
  manager.
  .
- This is the current development branch of Ion.
- .
- Website: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/
+  Homepage: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/
 
 Package: ion3-dev
 Section: non-free/devel
@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@
 Depends: libx11-dev, libsm-dev, lua5.1, gcc (>> 3)
 Description: ion3 development files
  This package contains the files necessary for building extension
- modules to the window manager Ion.
+ modules to the Ion window manager.
 
 Package: ion3-doc
 Section: non-free/doc
@@ -46,6 +44,6 @@
 Recommends: lynx | www-browser
 Suggests: doc-base, dwww | doc-central | dhelp
 Description: ion3 documentation
- This package contains the document "Configuring and extending Ion3
- with Lua" which explains how to configure and extend the window
- manager Ion.
+ This package contains the document 'Configuring and extending Ion3
+ with Lua' which explains how to configure and extend the Ion window
+ manager.

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