Package: dhcp3
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Thursday, May 03, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for dhcp3.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading dhcp3 with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Saturday, May 26, 2007, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
Thursday, June 07, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

On Friday, June 08, 2007, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable'), (1, 
'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.20-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3.old/debian/dhcp3-relay.templates
      2007-04-30 11:10:25.368888149 +0200
+++ 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3/debian/dhcp3-relay.templates
  2007-05-23 15:45:53.464094876 +0200
@@ -1,24 +1,34 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dhcp3-relay/servers
 Type: string
-_Description: DHCP servers to which the DHCP relay should forward requests to:
- The name or IP address of at least one DHCP server to which DHCP and BOOTP
- requests should be relayed must be specified on the command line.
+_Description: Servers the DHCP relay should forward requests to:
+ Please enter the hostname or IP address of at least one DHCP server
+ to which DHCP and BOOTP requests should be relayed.
  .
- You can specify more than one server, just separate the server names (or
- IP addresses) with spaces.
+ You can specify more than one server; server names or
+ IP addresses should then be space-separated.
 
 Template: dhcp3-relay/interfaces
 Type: string
 _Description: Interfaces the DHCP relay should listen on:
- The names of the network interfaces that dhcrelay should attempt to
- configure may be specified on the command line using the -i option. If no
- interface names are specified on the command line dhcrelay will identify
- all network interfaces, elimininating non-broadcast interfaces if
- possible, and attempt to configure each interface.
+ Please enter the names of the network interfaces that dhcp3-relay
+ should attempt to configure, as a space-separated list.
+ .
+ Leave this field blank to allow for automatic detection and
+ configuration of network interfaces by dhcp3-relay, in which case
+ only broadcast interfaces will be used (if possible).
 
 Template: dhcp3-relay/options
 Type: string
-_Description: Additional options for the Daemon:
- It is possible to specify additional options for the DHCP relay daemon.
+_Description: Additional options for the DHCP relay daemon:
+ Please specify any additional options for the DHCP relay daemon.
  .
- example: "-m replace" or "-a -D"
+ For example: "-m replace" or "-a -D".
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3.old/debian/dhcp3-server.templates
     2007-04-30 11:10:25.416888423 +0200
+++ 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3/debian/dhcp3-server.templates
 2007-05-23 15:45:53.620096326 +0200
@@ -1,33 +1,44 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dhcp3-server/config_warn
 Type: note
-_Description: Manual configuration required after installation!
- After the DHCP server is installed you will need to manually configure it
- by editing the file /etc/dhcp3/dhcpd.conf. Please note that a sample
- dhcpd.conf is supplied, but the configuration there is just a sample that
- requires editing and customization to your own network environment.
+_Description: Manual configuration required after installation
+ After the DHCP server is installed, you will need to manually configure it
+ by editing the file /etc/dhcp3/dhcpd.conf. Please note that the dhcpd.conf
+ supplied is just a sample, and must be adapted to the network environment.
  .
  Please configure the DHCP server as soon as the installation finishes.
 
 Template: dhcp3-server/interfaces
 Type: string
 _Description: Network interfaces on which the DHCP server should listen:
- You can enter one or more valid interface names, like eth0. If you want to
- serve DHCP request on more than one interface, please separate them with
- spaces. If you want dhcpd to figure out the interface leave this parameter
+ Please enter a space-separated list of interfaces names (e.g. eth0) 
+ on which the server should answer DHCP requests.
+ .
+ The interfaces will be automatically detected if this field is left
  blank.
 
+# Should probably be dropped
 Template: dhcp3-server/new_auth_behavior
 Type: note
 _Description: Non-authoritative version of DHCP server
- The version 3 DHCP server is now non-authoritative by default.
+ The version 3 DHCP server is non-authoritative by default.
  .
  This means that if a client requests an address that the server knows
  nothing about and the address is incorrect for that network segment, the
  server will _not_ send a DHCPNAK (which tells the client it should stop
- using the address.) If you want to change this behavior, you must
+ using the address). If you want to change this behavior, you must
  explicitly state in dhcpd.conf what network segments your server is
  authoritative for using the 'authoritative' statement.
 
+# Should probably be dropped
 Template: dhcp3-server/new_next-server_behaviour
 Type: note
 _Description: Change in default behaviour of the next-server directive
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3.old/debian/dhcp3-client.templates
     2007-04-30 11:10:25.364888126 +0200
+++ 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3/debian/dhcp3-client.templates
 2007-05-23 15:45:53.728097331 +0200
@@ -1,13 +1,25 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
+# Should probably be dropped
 Template: dhcp3-client/dhclient-script_moved
 Type: note
-_Description: dhclient-script has moved!
- As of 3.0.4-2, dhclient-script is installed in /sbin and is no longer a
- conffile. /etc/dhcp3/dhclient-script appears to have been modified at some
- point, so it has not been removed, however it is no longer being used.
+_Description: dhclient-script moved
+ As of 3.0.4-2, dhclient-script is installed in /sbin and is no longer
+ registered as a configuration file. /etc/dhcp3/dhclient-script
+ appears to have been modified at some point, so it has not been
+ removed. However it is no longer being used.
  .
- Please consider using the hook infrastructure (see dhclient-script(8) for more
- information) instead of modifying dhclient-script.
+ Please consider using the hook infrastructure (see dhclient-script(8)
+ for more information) instead of modifying dhclient-script.
 
+# Should probably be dropped
 Template: dhcp3-client/dhclient-needs-restarting
 Type: note
 _Description: dhclient needs restarting
--- /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3.old/debian/control    
2007-04-30 11:10:25.416888423 +0200
+++ /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dhcp3/dhcp3/debian/control        
2007-05-08 18:12:46.929574061 +0200
@@ -12,25 +12,24 @@
 Depends: debianutils (>= 2.8.2), dhcp3-common (= ${Source-Version}), 
${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Conflicts: dhcp
 Description: DHCP server for automatic IP address assignment
- This is the DHCP server from version 3 of the Internet Software
- Consortium DHCP package. For more information visit the ISC web
- site at http://www.isc.org.
+ This is the server from version 3 of the Internet Software
+ Consortium's implementation of DHCP. For more information, visit
+ http://www.isc.org.
  .
  Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol (DHCP) is a protocol like BOOTP
- (actually dhcpd includes much of the functionality of BOOTPD!). It assigns
- IP addresses to clients based on lease times. DHCP is used extensively
- by Microsoft and more recently also by Apple. It is probably essential
- in any multi-platform environment.
+ (actually dhcpd includes much of the functionality of bootpd). It
+ gives client machines "leases" for IP addresses and can
+ automatically set their network configuration.
  .
- Multiple Ethernet Interfaces are supported by this DHCP package.
+ This server can handle multiple ethernet interfaces.
 
 Package: dhcp3-common
 Architecture: any
 Section: net
 Depends: debianutils (>= 2.8.2), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
-Description: Common files used by all the dhcp3* packages
- This package contains all the files used by all the packages
- from ISC DHCP version 3.
+Description: common files used by all the dhcp3* packages
+ This package contains the files used by all the packages from ISC
+ DHCP version 3.
 
 Package: dhcp3-dev
 Priority: optional
@@ -38,7 +37,7 @@
 Section: devel
 Depends: libc6-dev
 Description: API for accessing and modifying the DHCP server and client state
- OMAPI, an API for accessing and modifying the DHCP server and
+ OMAPI is an API for accessing and modifying the DHCP server and
  client state.
 
 Package: dhcp3-client
@@ -46,18 +45,20 @@
 Depends: debianutils (>= 2.8.2), dhcp3-common (= ${Source-Version}), 
${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: resolvconf, avahi-autoipd
 Conflicts: dhcp-client (<< 3.0), samba-common (<< 3.0.0beta1-2)
-Description: DHCP Client
- This is the DHCP client from version 3 of the Internet Software
- Consortium DHCP package. For more information visit the ISC web
- site at http://www.isc.org.
+Description: DHCP client
+ This is the client from version 3 of the Internet Software
+ Consortium's implementation of DHCP. For more information visit
+ http://www.isc.org.
  .
- This is a split off from the dhcp package and contains the DHCP client
- tools.
- .
- Cable modem users likely need this or another dhcp client to successfully
- connect to the network.
+ Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol (DHCP) is a protocol like BOOTP
+ (actually dhcpd includes much of the functionality of bootpd). It
+ gives client machines "leases" for IP addresses and can
+ automatically set their network configuration. If your machine
+ depends on DHCP (especially likely if it's a workstation on a large
+ network, or a laptop, or attached to a cable modem), keep this or
+ another DHCP client installed.
  .
- Documentation (apart from manpages) can be found in the dhcp package.
+ Extra documentation can be found in the package dhcp3-common.
 
 Package: dhcp3-client-udeb
 Priority: extra
@@ -74,13 +75,12 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: debianutils (>= 2.8.2), dhcp3-common (= ${Source-Version}), 
${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Conflicts: dhcp-relay
-Description: DHCP Relay
- This is the DHCP relay from version 3 of the Internet Software
- Consortium DHCP package. For more information visit the ISC web
- site at http://www.isc.org.
- .
- Installing this package will make the machine it is installed on to
- a dhcp relay. You need to have a DHCP or BOOTP server reachable in order
- to use the relay.
+Description: DHCP relay daemon
+ This is the relay from version 3 of the Internet Software
+ Consortium's implementation of DHCP. For more information visit
+ http://www.isc.org.
+ .
+ Installing this package will make the machine a DHCP relay, which
+ requires a reachable DHCP or BOOTP server in order to function.
  .
- Documentation (apart from manpages) can be found in the dhcp package.
+ Extra documentation can be found in the package dhcp3-common.

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