Package: dtc-xen Severity: normal Tags: patch While translating your Debconf template to German the German l10n team noticed several problems with your debconf template which are listed in the following pseudo patch. After applying and before a new upload, I ask you to consider the following steps: a) Ask for review in the SMITH project, c.f. http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2007/04/msg00000.html b) Notify the translators of your debconf template with the updated po file to give them a chance to update the translation as well.
Changes:
This sentence does not make sense, both in grammar as well as in
content. One interpretation is given in my patch, please double check
if it is the intended one:
-"Dtc-xen will bind a SOAP Python server (to which a dtc panel can connect, in "
+"Dtc-xen will bind to a SOAP Python server (to which a dtc panel can connect,
in "
However, this still leaves me a little bit puzzled. Typically, one
binds to a port or conntects with a server, not cross-wise.
"pass" is ambigous. It could mean passport or password or passphrase
or ...
-msgid "SOAP server pass:"
+msgid "SOAP server password:"
-"Server). The current /etc/apt/sources.list file will be copied the created "
+"Server). The current /etc/apt/sources.list file will be copied into the
created "
A "grant" is typically some money (like a stipend). Looking at the
context, I think the following change is correct:
-"and add the grant of xm console to the group xenusers so that users can "
+"and add the permission to access the xm console to the group xenusers so that
users can "
You cannot mount a manager (LVM = logical volume manager):
-"mount the LVM or file loopback partition on the dom0 of the Xen server."
+"mount the logical volume or file loopback partition on the dom0 of the Xen
server."
-- System Information:
Debian Release: 4.0
APT prefers stable
APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
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