Davide Viti wrote: > On Sun, Jan 21, 2007 at 11:55:40AM -0800, Josh Triplett wrote: >> How about just changing the beginning to something like "DejaVu provides an >> expanded...", or "This package provides the DejaVu fonts, expanded versions >> of..."? > > Description: DejaVu provides an expanded version of the Vera family > aiming for quality and broader Unicode coverage while retaining the
The short description seems to have gotten lost, and instead the long
description starts in the short description. You previously had:
> Description: Vera font family derivate with additional characters
> Expanded version of the Vera family aiming for quality and broader
That short description looked good; the long description just needed to stop
using a fragment.
> original Vera style. DejaVu currently works towards conformance with
> the Multilingual European Standards (MES-1 and MES-2) Unicode
^ for
> coverage. The Dejavu fonts provide serif, sans and monospaced
s/Dejavu/DejaVu/
Full copy of the description with those last three changes incorporated:
Description: Vera font family derivate with additional characters
DejaVu provides an expanded version of the Vera font family aiming for
quality and broader Unicode coverage while retaining the original Vera
style. DejaVu currently works towards conformance with the Multilingual
European Standards (MES-1 and MES-2) for Unicode coverage. The DejaVu
fonts provide serif, sans and monospaced variants.
.
DejaVu fonts are intended for use on low-resolution devices (mainly
computer screens) but can be used in printing as well.
- Josh Triplett
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