Package: rocksndiamonds
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

The debconf templates you introduced in your package do not closely follow
the Developers Reference recommendations, nor use completely correct English
(or typography).

The attached patch is, depite my incomplete knowledge of English, an attempt
to rewrite them to better fit the current recommended way to write debconf
templates.

Please consider getting templates reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
mailing list in such cases.

After fixing this and before uploading a new package, please consider using
the "podebconf-report-po" utility to call for templates translations.

For this, after fixing your templates file:

-run debconf-updatepo
-run "podebconf-report-po --call" and leave translators a decent delay to
send you new translations (somethign like 7-10 days)

In the future, in case you fix or change the debconf templates, you'll be
able to use that "podebconf-report-po" utility alone, to warn translators of the
changes and give them a chance to update their translations. Please have a
look at this utility's man page.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 4.0
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Kernel: Linux 2.6.18-2-686
Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
--- templates.ori       2007-01-07 07:34:27.843319576 +0100
+++ templates   2007-01-07 07:37:11.352551922 +0100
@@ -2,7 +2,10 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Download non-free game data?
- These games require data files, that are not available under free software 
license and so are not distributable with debian. This script may automatically 
download data files from the net and install into your system. 
+ These games require data files that are not available under a free
+ software license and so are not distributable with Debian. This
+ script may automatically download these data files from the net and install
+ them on your system.
 
 Template: rocksndiamonds/select_games
 Type: multiselect
@@ -11,9 +14,10 @@
 
 Template: rocksndiamonds/util_notfound
 Type: error
-_Description: For downloading and unpacking You need these utilits:
- wget, 7-zip, unzip, tar.
+_Description: Missing utilities for download or unpacking
+ The wget, 7-zip, unzip, tar are needed to either download or
+ unpack the game data.
  .
- Some of them are not installed on Your computer.
- You should install them and then restart this script.
-
+ Some of them are not available on this system.
+ You should install them and then reconfigure this package by
+ using 'dpkg-reconfigure rocksndiamonds".

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