Package: openntpd Version: 3.9p1-3 Severity: minor Tags: patch Hi,
Your package's description contains several grammatical mistakes, making it difficult to understand. Please consider replacing your package's description in debian/control with the attached update. It fixes the grammatical mistakes and makes the description more similar to the description of the ntp package. Thanks! Christine -- System Information: Debian Release: 4.0 APT prefers unstable APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental') Architecture: i386 (i686) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash Kernel: Linux 2.6.18-3-686 Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
--- debian/control 2006-12-17 00:26:08.000000000 -0500 +++ debian-new/control 2006-12-17 00:55:59.000000000 -0500 @@ -12,13 +12,15 @@ Conflicts: time-daemon, ntp, chrony Replaces: time-daemon, ntp, chrony Description: OpenBSD NTP daemon - NTP, the Network Time Protocol, is used to keep the computers clock - synchronize. It provides the ability to sync the local clock to remote - NTP servers and can act as NTP server itself, redistributing the local - clock. + NTP, the Network Time Protocol, is used to keep computer clocks + accurate by synchronizing them over the Internet or a local network, + or by following an accurate hardware receiver that interprets GPS, + DCF-77, NIST or similar time signals. . - This is an alternative implementation of the NTP software made by the - OpenBSD project. It makes use of privilege separation. + This is an alternative implementation of the NTP software, made by the + OpenBSD project. It makes use of privilege separation, only + implements a subset of the NTP protocol, and does not adjust the + rate of the clock. . - It only implements a subset of the NTP protocol and does not adjust the - rate of the clock. Alternatives packages are ntp and chrony. + Alternative packages which provide similar functionality are "ntp" + and "chrony".
