Package: hpoj
Version: 0.91-10
Severity: minor

This sentence in README.Debian has unnecessary technical jargon, spelling
mistakes and ambiguity:

"Upstream development for HP multifunction devices has been overtake
by the HPLIP package, if you are running a USB or JetDirect interface
you proably want to use HPLIP instead."

I believe it would read better as:

'If you have a Hewlett-Packard multifunction device with a USB or
JetDirect interface you would be better served by the 'hplip' package'

(yes, I know one of the spelling mistakes is in bug 363933)



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