On 23-Aug-06, 17:48 (CDT), Pierre-Alexandre Meyer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: 
> * Package name    : rash
>   Version         : 1.2.2
>   Upstream Author : Tom Cuchta <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> * URL             : http://sourceforge.net/projects/rqms/
> * License         : GPL
>   Programming Lang: PHP
>   Description     : Rash is a PHP/MySQL script for the management of quotes

Don't repeat the package name in the short description. "PHP/MySQL
script for management of quotes" is fine. (Maybe "siq quotes" would be
better.)

>    Rash is a PHP/MySQL script for the management of quotes, similar to
>    the script in use at http://www.bash.org -- but designed as an entirely
>    seperate piece of code.
>    It is *highly* customizable to any layout you want to throw at it.

Need a blank line between paragraphs.

Steve

-- 
Steve Greenland
    The irony is that Bill Gates claims to be making a stable operating
    system and Linus Torvalds claims to be trying to take over the
    world.       -- seen on the net


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