Hi Sébastien!

Some grammar nitpicks:

On Sun, 15 Sep 2024 13:56:13 +0200
Sébastien Noel <sebast...@twolife.be> wrote:

> Package: wnpp
> Severity: wishlist
> Owner: Sébastien Noel <sebast...@twolife.be>
> X-Debbugs-Cc: debian-devel-ga...@lists.debian.org, sebast...@twolife.be
> 
> * Package name    : openmohaa
>    Version         : 0.70.0
> * URL             : https://github.com/openmoh/openmohaa
> * License         : GPLv2+
>    Programming Lang: C/C++
>    Description     : military WWII first-person shooter game
> 
> "Medal of Honor: Allied Assault" is a first-person shooter video game
> that simulate infantry combat in the European and North African theaters
> during World War II. It was originally released in 2002.
> 

"simulate" => "simulates" 
 
> OpenMoHAA is a re-implementation, based on ioquake3, that allow playing
> "Medal of Honor: Allied Assault" and it's two expansions.
> 

"allow" => "allows"

"it’s" => "its" .

Note that I am not a debian packager, just am subscribed to this list.

> This package alone isn't of any use; it only contains the game engine,
> you will need a copy of the original game for this package to be
> useful. This can be purchased from GOG.
> 



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