Scott Kitterman wrote:
>       <listitem>
>         <para>
>           The <systemitem role="package">spf-milter-python</systemitem> 
> package
>           will be removed in the Bullseye release.  It is replaced by the
[...]
>       <listitem>
>         <para>
>           The <systemitem role="package">dkim-milter-python</systemitem> 
> package
>           will be removed in the Bullseye release.  It is replaced by the

I'd like to suggest a less repetitive version:

      <listitem>
        <para>
          The packages <systemitem role="package">spf-milter-python</systemitem>
          and <systemitem role="package">dkim-milter-python</systemitem> are no 
longer
          actively developed upstream, but their more feature-rich replacements,
          <systemitem role="package">pyspf-milter</systemitem> and <systemitem
          role="package">dkimpy-milter</systemitem>, are available in buster. 
Users
          should migrate to the new packages before the old ones are removed in 
bullseye.
        </para>
      </listitem>

Releasenames are usually lowercase, or of course we could use
&releasename; and &nextreleasename;.

The attached patch puts this at the end of "deprecated-components".
-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff --git a/en/issues.dbk b/en/issues.dbk
index 11a50932..83c89ce9 100644
--- a/en/issues.dbk
+++ b/en/issues.dbk
@@ -202,6 +202,16 @@ information mentioned in <xref linkend="morereading"/>.
           under active development.
         </para>
       </listitem>
+     <listitem>
+        <para>
+          The packages <systemitem role="package">spf-milter-python</systemitem>
+          and <systemitem role="package">dkim-milter-python</systemitem> are no longer
+          actively developed upstream, but their more feature-rich replacements,
+          <systemitem role="package">pyspf-milter</systemitem> and <systemitem
+          role="package">dkimpy-milter</systemitem>, are available in buster. Users
+          should migrate to the new packages before the old ones are removed in bullseye.
+        </para>
+      </listitem>
 
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>

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