Package: kernel-package
Version: 10.036
Severity: normal

The debconf templates inserted in created kernel packages do not completely
follow the recommendations given in the Developer's Reference:

-The short description is a sentence which is slightly discouraged (some
 interfaces use it as a "title" and sentences do not fit well as titles
 
-use of first person: "I repeat...". Several sections of the DR
 discourage the use of first person with the argument that "the computer is
 not a person". I usually add that this gives a feeling of non
 "professionnal" user interaction. A common unwritten rule about user
 interaction is to keep it as neutral as possible.
 
 I suggest rewriting this to:
 
 You have to reboot in order for the modules file to be created correctly.
 Until then, it may be impossible to load some modules so the reboot should
 take place as soon as this install is finished.
 
 This means removing the "I cannot stress that too much" thing.
 
I haven't checked other templates possibly created by the package, but IIRC,
I have about the same concerns for them.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: testing/unstable
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Shell:  /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
Kernel: Linux 2.6.15-1-686
Locale: LANG=fr_FR.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=fr_FR.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)

Versions of packages kernel-package depends on:
ii  dpkg                     1.13.16         package maintenance system for Deb
ii  dpkg-dev                 1.13.16         package building tools for Debian
ii  file                     4.15-2          Determines file type using "magic"
ii  gcc [c-compiler]         4:4.0.2-2       The GNU C compiler
ii  gcc-3.3 [c-compiler]     1:3.3.6-12      The GNU C compiler
ii  gcc-4.0 [c-compiler]     4.0.2-10        The GNU C compiler
ii  gettext                  0.14.5-2        GNU Internationalization utilities
ii  make                     3.80+3.81.rc1-1 The GNU version of the "make" util
ii  perl                     5.8.8-2         Larry Wall's Practical Extraction 
ii  po-debconf               0.9.2           manage translated Debconf template

Versions of packages kernel-package recommends:
ii  bzip2                         1.0.3-2    high-quality block-sorting file co
ii  libc6-dev [libc-dev]          2.3.6-3    GNU C Library: Development Librari

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