Hi Daniel, On Sun, 04 Oct 2015, Daniel Pocock wrote: > This patch adds to chapter 11, giving a brief introduction to RTC > services on Debian
We have a section dedicated to XMPP and setting up ejabberd in Chapter 13 already: https://debian-handbook.info/browse/jessie/ch13s07.html#idm140062055217232 I think you should put your section there, either by separating XMPP from the rest so that you can keep the current section or by merging the existing section in an expanded section covering real time communication. I would need that rather quickly if you want to make it to the jessie edition. > + <keyword>Prosody</keyword> You don't even mention Prosody in your text. You might want to mention it as an alternative to ejabberd (in a sidebar possibly?) in the current section about IM. > + <para>The Falcot Corp administrators decided that they would use a > + SIP proxy and not a full PBX like Asterisk at the network boundary > + because they wanted to maximize connectivity and stability while also > + having a relatively simple configuration. They chose the repro SIP proxy > + from the reSIProcate project because it has been built from the ground up <emphasis>reSIProcate</emphasis> > + to support IPv6 and TLS and it also has support for WebRTC. In the > future, > + they intend to setup an internal PBX using Asterisk, however, all calls > going > + to the Asterisk server will be routed through the SIP proxy.</para> > + > + <para>Comprehensive details of how to plan and install these services > + are available in the Real-Time Communications Quick Start Guide <emphasis> around the title > + which includes examples specific to Debian. > + <ulink type="block" url="http://rtcquickstart.org"/></para> Otherwise it looks good to me. Cheers, -- Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer Support Debian LTS: http://www.freexian.com/services/debian-lts.html Learn to master Debian: http://debian-handbook.info/get/
