Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, April 29, 2014, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for igtf-policy-bundle.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, April 29, 2014. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- igtf-policy-bundle.old/debian/templates.in  2014-04-24 08:41:06.143267631 
+0200
+++ igtf-policy-bundle/debian/templates.in      2014-05-13 06:51:37.007572784 
+0200
@@ -1,23 +1,35 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: igtf-policy-@PROFILE@/install_profile
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Install the IGTF @PROFILE@ CAs in 
/etc/grid-security/certificates?
- This package installs the IGTF CAs in /etc/grid-security/certificates.
- There are two ways to deal with these certificates:
- - yes: install all, except those in the exclude list
- - no: install only CAs in the include list.
- The include/exclude lists are covered by the next question.
+_Description: Trust IGTF @PROFILE@ CAs by default?
+ Trusted IGTF Certification Authority certificates are installed in
+ /etc/grid-security/certificates.
+ .
+ Accept this option to have certificates included by default unless they
+ are explicitly excluded. Reject it to choose the reverse policy,
+ excluding them unless explicitly included.
+ .
+ You will then have the opportunity to define the list of exceptions.
 
 Template: igtf-policy-@PROFILE@/exclude_ca
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: ${exclude_ca}
-_Description: Certificates to explicitly exclude
- Select which certificates should not be installed in
+_Description: Certificates to explicitly exclude:
+ Please select which certificates should not be installed in
  /etc/grid-security/certificates.
 
 Template: igtf-policy-@PROFILE@/include_ca
 Type: multiselect
 Choices: ${include_ca}
-_Description: Certificates to explicitly include
- Select which certificates should be installed in
+_Description: Certificates to explicitly include:
+ Please select which certificates should be installed in
  /etc/grid-security/certificates.
--- igtf-policy-bundle.old/debian/control       2014-04-24 08:41:06.143267631 
+0200
+++ igtf-policy-bundle/debian/control   2014-04-30 19:04:58.659796366 +0200
@@ -14,13 +14,12 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: fetch-crl, openssl
 Suggests: ca-certificates
-Description: IGTF classic profile for Authority Root Certificates
- The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common
- trust base for the benefit of distributed science and research
- computing infrastructures by maintaining a list of trust anchors, for
- accredited authorities. The distribution contains root certificates,
- certificate revocation list (CRL) locations, contact information, and
- signing policies.
+Description: IGTF classic profile for Certificate Authorities
+ The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common trust
+ base for the benefit of distributed science and research computing
+ infrastructures. It provides a list of accredited trust anchors, with
+ root certificates, certificate revocation list locations, contact
+ information, and signing policies.
  .
  This package contains the trust anchors for the classic profile.
 
@@ -29,13 +28,12 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: fetch-crl, openssl
 Suggests: ca-certificates
-Description: IGTF MICS profile for Authority Root Certificates
- The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common
- trust base for the benefit of distributed science and research
- computing infrastructures by maintaining a list of trust anchors, for
- accredited authorities. The distribution contains root certificates,
- certificate revocation list (CRL) locations, contact information, and
- signing policies.
+Description: IGTF MICS profile for Certificate Authorities
+ The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common trust
+ base for the benefit of distributed science and research computing
+ infrastructures. It provides a list of accredited trust anchors, with
+ root certificates, certificate revocation list locations, contact
+ information, and signing policies.
  .
  This package contains the trust anchors for the MICS (Member Integrated
  Credential Services) profile.
@@ -45,13 +43,12 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: fetch-crl, openssl
 Suggests: ca-certificates
-Description: IGTF SLCS profile for Authority Root Certificates
- The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common
- trust base for the benefit of distributed science and research
- computing infrastructures by maintaining a list of trust anchors, for
- accredited authorities. The distribution contains root certificates,
- certificate revocation list (CRL) locations, contact information, and
- signing policies.
+Description: IGTF SLCS profile for Certificate Authorities
+ The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common trust
+ base for the benefit of distributed science and research computing
+ infrastructures. It provides a list of accredited trust anchors, with
+ root certificates, certificate revocation list locations, contact
+ information, and signing policies.
  .
  This package contains the trust anchors for the SLCS (Short Lived
  Credential Services) profile.
@@ -61,13 +58,12 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: openssl
 Suggests: ca-certificates
-Description: IGTF unaccredited Authority Root Certificates
- The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common
- trust base for the benefit of distributed science and research
- computing infrastructures by maintaining a list of trust anchors, for
- accredited authorities. The distribution contains root certificates,
- certificate revocation list (CRL) locations, contact information, and
- signing policies.
+Description: IGTF unaccredited Certificate Authorities
+ The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common trust
+ base for the benefit of distributed science and research computing
+ infrastructures. It provides a list of accredited trust anchors, with
+ root certificates, certificate revocation list locations, contact
+ information, and signing policies.
  .
  This package contains several unaccredited trust anchors. Use with
  caution, as they come without any guarantees.
@@ -77,13 +73,12 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: openssl
 Suggests: ca-certificates
-Description: IGTF experimental Authority Root Certificates
- The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common
- trust base for the benefit of distributed science and research
- computing infrastructures by maintaining a list of trust anchors, for
- accredited authorities. The distribution contains root certificates,
- certificate revocation list (CRL) locations, contact information, and
- signing policies.
+Description: IGTF experimental Certificate Authorities
+ The International Grid Trust Federation (IGTF) maintains a common trust
+ base for the benefit of distributed science and research computing
+ infrastructures. It provides a list of accredited trust anchors, with
+ root certificates, certificate revocation list locations, contact
+ information, and signing policies.
  .
  This package contains several experimental trust anchors. Use with
  caution, as they come without any guarantees.
--- igtf-policy-bundle.old/debian/changelog     2014-04-24 08:41:06.143267631 
+0200
+++ igtf-policy-bundle/debian/changelog 2014-06-02 07:02:10.795907836 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+igtf-policy-bundle (1.56-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #745761
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #748451
+  * Portuguese (Américo Monteiro).  Closes: #748717
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #749151
+  * French (Julien Patriarca).  Closes: #749219
+  * Polish (Michał Kułach).  Closes: #750027
+  * Japanese (victory).  Closes: #750055
+  * Finnish (Esko Arajärvi).  Closes: #750061
+  * German (Stefan Schroeder).  Closes: #750126
+  * Italian (Beatrice Torracca).  Closes: #750130
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Fri, 25 Apr 2014 07:49:57 +0200
+
 igtf-policy-bundle (1.56-2) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Update debian/copyright according to the upstream license.

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