Package: openrc
Version: 0.12.4+20131230-9
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

There are cut-and-paste errors in some of the package descriptions:

>  Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
                         ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
And librc1-dev lacks a final "what this package provides" paragraph.

It also seems to me that the description doesn't capture the reasons a
user might want to install OpenRC rather than the default (how many
Debian users are going to want it *because* it's compatible with
Gentoo init scripts?).  I won't press the issue because I'm scared
someone will ask me to come up with an accurate and objective
one-liner version of https://wiki.debian.org/Debate/initsystem/openrc.
It would probably need revising before Jessie releases anyway.
-- 
JBR     with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
        sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
diff -ru openrc-0.12.4+20131230.pristine/debian/control openrc-0.12.4+20131230/debian/control
--- openrc-0.12.4+20131230.pristine/debian/control	2014-02-20 13:09:55.000000000 +0000
+++ openrc-0.12.4+20131230/debian/control	2014-03-01 11:07:43.214543141 +0000
@@ -53,10 +53,10 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
  This package provides the runtime library.
 
@@ -69,10 +69,10 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
  This package provides the debug symbols for the runtime library.
 
@@ -85,11 +85,12 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
+ This package provides development files for the runtime library.
 
 Package: libeinfo1
 Architecture: any
@@ -99,10 +100,10 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
  This package provides a runtime library that supports displaying messages on
  the console.
@@ -116,10 +117,10 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
  This package provides the debug symbols for libeinfo1, a runtime library that
  supports displaying messages on the console.
@@ -133,10 +134,10 @@
  init, for booting, changing runlevels, starting and stopping services, and
  shutting down.
  .
- Originally written as Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100%
- compatible with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used
- by Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the old
- style init system historically available in Debian.
+ Originally written as a Gentoo project, OpenRC is 100% compatible
+ with Gentoo init scripts. OpenRC, however, is not exclusively used by
+ Gentoo Linux, and aims at being platform-agnostic, and supporting the
+ old style init system historically available in Debian.
  .
  This package provides a development library that supports displaying messages
  on the console.

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