On Wed, 26 Feb 2014 01:17:53 -0500
Daniel Kahn Gillmor <[email protected]> wrote:
[...]
> slt lets a user can send TLS/SSL connections for multiple different
I'd rephrase it as "lets the user direct TLS/SSL connections..."
> applications to the same port and the server can forward them all to
> the appropriate backend hosts depending on the intended destination.
> .
> slt is capable of either terminating the TLS and passing the
> cleartext traffic to the origin server (if it has appropriate key
> material), or just passing the through the traffic directly (if it
> has no key material).
I'd rephrase it as well: "..., or just passing the traffic through (if
it has...".
I'm not the native speaker so please be warned; but these two phrases
catched my eye. Both are obviously incorrect ("lets a user can send"
and "passing the through the") but I'd also change them slightly so
that they read better, as showed.
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